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You Won't Take Me Out Alive
11:02 Apr 22 2010
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Remember when

Remember why

Life was good

And you were mine

We came apart

The time moved on

Now I wake up

And you are gone

You can try to tear me down

You can try to take my pride

You can try to rip out my heart

But you won't take me out alive

You can try to shut me out

You can take away my light

You can try to hold me down

But you won't take me out alive

You wasn't there

You never cared

To take you back

I wouldn't dare

Remember me

Your pride and joy

Your small, pathetic

Little toy

You can try to take your shots

You can fill me full of lies

You can try to say i'm sorry

But you won't take me out alive

You can try to change it all

You can scream and you can cry

You can never change the past

And you won't take me out alive

My only prayer

Is that he sees

All that you

Have done to me

I hope he digs

Up your past

That poisoned kiss

Might be your last

COMMENTS

x1Luke6x
16:24 Apr 22 2010

This is pretty good. I like it. (:

DiamondDragon
01:59 Apr 23 2010

well done my friend

BelovedxTwilight
21:25 Apr 23 2010

Well done :)

MissSacha
23:12 Apr 23 2010

wicked pain in your writing here.. I like that..A LOT!

hannahrose
10:20 Apr 24 2010

LOVEIT VERY TOUCHING YOU HAVEAREAL TALENT FORWRITING XX

DeMonic
23:51 Apr 25 2010

talented? I think so!!! :) Very awesome.

slipknotbabe356
04:57 Apr 29 2010

this is my fave!

Dekara
07:28 May 02 2010

You definitely have a way with words, I liked them all.

LadyJigsaw
16:46 May 05 2010

Nice work :)

Bellanova333
03:30 May 06 2010

NICE! I love this

joselyn
23:41 May 13 2010

Really nice poem. Would make great lyrics for a song.

AzriellaRipley
06:01 May 22 2010

aesthetical....ineffable....

FeverDreams
16:16 May 26 2010

Impressed :)

solitariusmomentum
14:20 May 27 2010

awesome read. very well penned

4gottenmemories
23:07 Jun 04 2010

amazing talent you have.

MaidenUnderworld
23:50 Jun 04 2010

Well done. Can relate to that pain.

LadyCara
00:13 Jun 05 2010

Very good

foreveranangelicvampire
08:40 Jun 18 2010

wow very well written

Minde
10:35 Nov 26 2017

I love it

Cry
11:01 Apr 22 2010
Times Read: 725

Sitting here alone

I feel, just how much you made me feel

Like home, I know it's gone

But I can see you burning in my head

Everytime I call your name

I see your face in everything

But i can't stand another day

I want this all to go away

Still left here with this misery

And all these broken memories

Of yesterdays and everything

But all i really know is that

I cry for you

Every single day

Cries for you

Every waking thought

Cries for you

Every moment lost

Cries for you

Every moment gone

When you...walked away

I felt, everything we had just waste away

So lost...so gone

Just know, just how much you meant to me

In bed at night I close my eyes

But I am left with all these lies

I know you're gone but I'm still here

I try to see but nothings clear

Still i reach out my hand for you

Or something there to get me through

The longest days and coldest nights

But all that's really left is that

I cry for you

Every single day

Cries for you

Every waking thought

Cries for you

Every moment lost

Cries for you

Every moment gone

(Interlude)

I cry for you

Every single day

Cries for you

Every waking thought

Cries for you

Every moment lost

Cries for you

Every moment gone

COMMENTS

MissSacha
23:13 Apr 23 2010

HMM.. I think I like this one too

hannahrose
10:24 Apr 24 2010

VERY TOUCHING AND HEARTFELT I LOVE IT!

LadyJigsaw
16:47 May 05 2010

great dear

DemonzKiss
19:09 May 05 2010

I really liked this , it actually almost made me cry .. you must have gotten in my head cuz this is how I felt with my ex ... awesome work hun!

Bellanova333
03:33 May 06 2010

awwww this one is a tear jerker

great job ( ;

anubis
13:59 May 15 2010

i know that feeling - liked the poem lots

anubis
13:59 May 15 2010

i know that feeling - liked the poem lots

LadyCara
00:14 Jun 05 2010

Very heartfelt i really like this one

foreveranangelicvampire
08:43 Jun 18 2010

sad but great to sing

Help From Beyond
11:00 Apr 22 2010
Times Read: 725

I know you feel broken

Tired and bruised

Keep your chin up kid

I've been there too

Get back up

Put you pain at rest

Don't hang your head

You gave it your best

Don't you do that

Don't you lay back down

Dreams can't come true

If you still lie on the ground

Don't give up hope

That's not who you are

Never stop believing kid

Your goal hasn't gone far

Let time be your guidence

Let fate take control

Don't let pain consume you

It will swallow you whole

Keep following your heart

It will take you far

Stand up like the man

That I know you are