.
VR
Requiem's Journal


Requiem's Journal

THIS JOURNAL IS ON 132 FAVORITE JOURNAL LISTS

Honor: 0    [ Give / Take ]

PROFILE




2 entries this month
 

Yes.

00:05 Jul 28 2011
Times Read: 592


I stand before you, naked

from the mind out.

I stand before you, open

with hands out.



"Are you?" rumbles to my ears.

"Can you?" answer all my fears.

"WILL you?" dances 'cross my tears.





"Yes."





I stand before you, naked

from the spirit out.

I stand before you, open

with hope out.



"Are you?" tumbles clumsily.

"Can you?" dances dangerously.

"WILL you?" waits patiently.





"Yes."



I stand before you, naked

from the heart out.

I stand before you, open

with choice out.



"Are you?" rumbles.

"Can you?" answers.

"WILL you?" dances with falls of





"Yes."






*******************





It's been a long damn while since I have written in a medium other than short prose or haiku. Yeah, I still write bad poetry.





"A scintillating bowl full of yes" is what I wanted to portray, somehow. don't know that I DID.

COMMENTS

-



Lullaby
Lullaby
01:31 Jul 28 2011

... ♥

I wonder who told you your writing is bad? :P

It's perfect.





Joli
Joli
04:01 Jul 28 2011

Did you? YES! Love it, heart.



:)





 

12:28 Jul 26 2011
Times Read: 606






Night terror haiku



Screeching, skittering,

Monstrous, base and slithering,

My mind defeats me.

COMMENTS

-






COMPANY
REQUEST HELP
CONTACT US
SITEMAP
REPORT A BUG
UPDATES
LEGAL
TERMS OF SERVICE
PRIVACY POLICY
DMCA POLICY
REAL VAMPIRES LOVE VAMPIRE RAVE
© 2004 - 2025 Vampire Rave
All Rights Reserved.
Vampire Rave is a member of 
Page generated in 0.0862 seconds.
X
Username:

Password:
I agree to Vampire Rave's Privacy Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's Terms of Service.
I agree to Vampire Rave's DMCA Policy.
I agree to Vampire Rave's use of Cookies.
•  SIGN UP •  GET PASSWORD •  GET USERNAME  •
X