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He came from nowhere, finding me when I was

most vulnerable.

He won my trust, my heart;

With each passing day we grew closer.

In him I found security,

hope,

a sense of belonging,

and, yes,

even love.

He began to slip away, gradually,

always claiming innocence,

never owning up to the inevitable.

Doubts became questions

which hung in the air, unanswered.

He laid bare my emotions,

then discarded them one by one,

beginning with trust

and ending with love.

Back into the shadows he crept

unknowing,

unaware of the damage he wrought.

Uncaring.

Leaving behind a broken bleeding heart

that echoed to the sound of his departing laughter.

Knowing he never truly cared,

never truly loved

was the sharpest blow,

the deepest thrust.

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Angelus
00:08 Aug 26 2008

..excellent. (decribes how it feels, well.)

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LadyDarkRayne
09:41 Aug 29 2008

you write your emotions as well as I do.

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Deathwalker253
23:39 Feb 10 2009

I really like this one a lot. It shows how you felt, all those emotions bundled up into few words.

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Theban
16:41 Dec 08 2009

What, not cared in the way she wanted?



This is beautiful CarnelianMyst

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