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So, I have been thinking of writing a story based on a series of dreams I have had in the past and I came out with this, I know it probably needs a ton of work but this is only the intro I have so far. I am currently working on the plot right now, so please tell me what you think.

- Whoever reads this that is. I don't normally do journals so this is new to me.







Winged Wars & Forgotten Trails









As wings kissed the clouds and wind whipped past the scales of his massive wings, his brothers' call resounded off the high snow covered mountains all around. Fear pulsed through the great creatures body, blood pounded in his veins as he made his haste to the call.









- That's all I have so far, please forgive any mistakes and let me know where I am lacking, where i am strong and what I need to improve on. Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoyed it so far.

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MinaDracul
21:25 Sep 18 2014

Great so far...Keep writing. Let me know when you have added to it.~Mina

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