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yesterday i was extremely pissed off at my boyfriend and so i decided to write a poem. here it is. give me some feedback plz.





You said you'd never leave me,

You said we'd never part.

Choose your words wisely,

Before you rebreak my heart.



You promise me this,

You promise me that.

Choose your words carefully,

Before you're beaten with a bat.



You think you're so perfect,

You thought you were the best.

I thought you were perfect,

But, you're just like the rest.



You tell me things,

I think they're true.

Guess I am stupid,

For believing someone like you.



I thought I found true love,

But, how can that be believed?

Guess I must be blind,

For being so easily decived.



I want to give up,

Even though I should not.

I want to end it all,

Just sit here and rot.



My life is messed up,

You keep making it worse.

My life was going to get better,

I guess you were just a curse.



that's all i have so far