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on the razors edge, i slowly slip away. never fully understanding why i feel this way. my soul was set ablaze, lost and never found. so why am i still standing here and not 6feet under ground? the emptiness that consumes me, i never would have known, if the ugliness inside of me had never began to show. the thoughts that race in my mind, are not quit like before. i see myself crying, bleeding, and lying on the floor. the blood that stains my skin, left there to rot away, can only describe just how i feel through out each and every day.

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Lordpeace
12:39 Feb 08 2009

very evocative write some more dear

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obonewits
21:59 Feb 08 2009

Nice content. If you organized the cadence a bit, this would be a big smash. All my best. OB

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the sun sets, the moon starts to arise. i've found my first victim. no one around to hear his cries. the blood runs down slowly, as he quivers with fear. caught up in this moment, yet it seems so queer. with no hope left, his body begins to die. his soul permiates his body, as i let out a sigh.

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obonewits
22:00 Feb 08 2009

Laughing softly..don't play with your food. OB

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