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pretty corpse

07:18 Mar 28 2011
Times Read: 737


sometimes i forget

how much i like myself

i leave good feelings

on a shelf



i get these demons

in my head

they tell me that

i'm really dead



i lay around

and wonder why

i'm still alive

and haven't died



i stay inside

and have no fun

i skip the gym

and never run



now it's time

to hit the gym

and get my run on

once again



so when my life

has run it's course

at least i'll leave

a pretty corpse





by martin





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DarknessSettlesIn
DarknessSettlesIn
02:17 Mar 30 2011

cute





poisonwhore
poisonwhore
17:25 Apr 03 2011

really like that one,





 

arcadia

16:31 Mar 23 2011
Times Read: 753


lime green walls

in lime green halls

with numbered booths

and naked truths



drifters and zombies

licking their lips

dropping their pants

and grinding their hips



glory and gore

with creatures next door

who couldn't care less

if you're rich or you're poor



the black lights are on

at the devils pond

put your waterwings on

this won't take too long



hope you left your soul at the curb

now do not disturb





by martin





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moonkissed
moonkissed
17:02 Mar 23 2011

Pretty cool visual.





GrimmySoul
GrimmySoul
17:05 Mar 23 2011

Awesome





 

april showers

00:44 Mar 18 2011
Times Read: 778


april showers

bloody rain

salty teardrops

dripping pain



wana kill

but must restrain

the one i loved

is fucking lame



i'm tired of

the little games

wana see you

in hells flames



ignore you when

you call my name

time to play

my little game



april showers

dripping pain





by martin


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Oruticayavamp
Oruticayavamp
14:04 Mar 22 2011

my kinda poetry





poisonwhore
poisonwhore
17:27 Apr 03 2011

awesome... one of the best so far...





 

17:58 Mar 12 2011
Times Read: 787


blood in the water

water on the shore

hells bells are ringing

devils at the door



god and natures mother

smiling at their work

the keys to the kingdom

in the devils shirt



NOT FINISHED


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EAsSofia
EAsSofia
17:58 Mar 12 2011

i love this





Oruticayavamp
Oruticayavamp
14:03 Mar 22 2011

I love it so far





DarknessSettlesIn
DarknessSettlesIn
02:19 Mar 30 2011

good start





 

i'm so fucked

00:14 Mar 10 2011
Times Read: 827


i'm so fucked

you were real

we went to the movies together

and paraded our beauty at the waterfront



i'm so fucked

you were perfect

we were perfect all of the time

and we were only together part of the time



i'm so fucked

you wanted me

we could have been a couple

and all i wanted to be there for was the good times



i'm so fucked

you told me the truth

we could have been best friends

and i didn't listen so you went away forever



i'm so fucked





by martin


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DaygonaNightingale
DaygonaNightingale
03:35 Mar 10 2011

yea i know that one





martin
martin
03:47 Mar 10 2011

yep, too bad that by the time you know it, it's too late





GrimmySoul
GrimmySoul
15:24 Mar 10 2011

Ahhh I think we all could relate to this.

But its never too late until death comes in hand (at least how the sayings go)





shadowkiss92
shadowkiss92
21:46 Mar 10 2011

nice and know that feeling





DarknessSettlesIn
DarknessSettlesIn
13:43 Mar 11 2011

I agree with the comments this is very relatable, very well expressed.





 

the line

15:45 Mar 05 2011
Times Read: 845


so many people

that i'll never know

not the way i knew people

before there was the line



have you ever noticed

that even in a sea of people

that everyone is alone

in line with their phone



do you like the lines

on your new friends flat face

whos face is it ... really don't matter

you'll never touch it



cyber sex

stalking - blocking

get in line

piss off your time



i miss the old days

i miss looking into living eyes

i miss touching human beings

i miss knowing



who you really are





by martin


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LadyKrystalynDarkstar
LadyKrystalynDarkstar
20:37 Mar 08 2011

I really like this one!





DarknessSettlesIn
DarknessSettlesIn
13:46 Mar 11 2011

So true....

What is real is relative though.





 

nine years ten

00:27 Mar 02 2011
Times Read: 856


nine years clean

and mom's so proud

my daughter's still spun out

and dad's still dead



yeah-yeah

whoopty-whoop

everybody's happy

except me



i miss my drugs

i miss the hustle

but most of all

i miss my dad



i'm nine years clean

he's ten years dead

i'm sure my dad would've liked to see me clean

but it's probably a good thing that he didn't



because i'm miserable





by martin


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poisonwhore
poisonwhore
14:01 Mar 04 2011

nice poem, bad sad subject





martin
martin
15:54 Mar 10 2011

yep





DarknessSettlesIn
DarknessSettlesIn
13:52 Mar 11 2011

Wow you sound like the poster boy for NA! XD

But seriously I like your style of writing very bold I hope you can once again find joy but that it can be done sober.

Your writing is a gift, you life is a gift, focus on that and feel the good, praise is a drug too, you know....








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