sleep
sand drifts over heavy eyes
leading them down a quiet path
to sounds of quiet snoring
well its the third time I've done this poem but i finally finished it as i like
Red Water
Red water runs through the human faucet.
the red water pumps through,
the red water continues on,
the red water lives in the human faucet.
Make an opening in the human faucet.
the red water pumps out,
the red water runs free,
the red water comes out of the human faucet.
Stop the red water coming out the human faucet.
the red water slows pumping out less,
the red water thickens moving less,
the red water stops from the human faucet.
The foolish reopen the human faucet.
the red water runs anew,
the red water pumps harder,
the red water doesn't stop from the human faucet.
Red water empties from the human faucet.
the red water grows cold outside,
the red water spreads and stains,
no more red water in the human faucet.
COMMENTS
red water flows from the human faucet
red water flows without stop or wain
red water flows to stain the ground of its own color
red water flows to bring an empty joy
red water flows from its source to the cut
and then the heart beat no more
COMMENTS
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NeckcutterOfYourDreams
18:33 Jan 30 2009
You have beautiful words
evilsandwich
15:17 Aug 10 2009
i rlly like that ^_^