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lost love

18:15 Oct 07 2008
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i saw you the other day

at first i didn't believe

then i knew i

I tried to say

your name but

all i could mutter

was a wisper

for i saw her

my heart

sank as if

someone had

stuck a dagger in

me and dragged it

straight down ripping

it to pieces

my chest trying to

get a breath

yet something deep

inside sparked

a lost longing for

you then it died

and i let you walk

away as the tears

started to fall

and you disapeared in the

distance. as ive said many

times before i will always love you


COMMENTS

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demonlovesyou
demonlovesyou
18:36 Oct 08 2008

This the lovely one...



a very high class poem...



lovely rhyme...



simply i become fan of thine rhymes...



this sad piece is really beautiful dagger...








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