i saw you the other day
at first i didn't believe
then i knew i
I tried to say
your name but
all i could mutter
was a wisper
for i saw her
my heart
sank as if
someone had
stuck a dagger in
me and dragged it
straight down ripping
it to pieces
my chest trying to
get a breath
yet something deep
inside sparked
a lost longing for
you then it died
and i let you walk
away as the tears
started to fall
and you disapeared in the
distance. as ive said many
times before i will always love you
COMMENTS
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demonlovesyou
18:36 Oct 08 2008
This the lovely one...
a very high class poem...
lovely rhyme...
simply i become fan of thine rhymes...
this sad piece is really beautiful dagger...