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the demon

17:39 Jun 16 2008
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He satnds and watches

the prey at His feet

an innocent young woman

will make a sweet treat



she cowers in fear,

in hurt and in pain

He has made her nothing

she forgets her name



A sensation of burning

made by His lips

His teeth break her skin

as He grabs her hips



she lets go of all

all but her pride

He lets her go

she tries to hide



He will be back

she knows all to well

but for now He is gone

back down to hell


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xXxReadyMadePoisonxXx
xXxReadyMadePoisonxXx
23:16 Jun 16 2008

i like it hun. :) Very nice.





vampyricfaerie07
vampyricfaerie07
00:39 Jun 17 2008

You're a good poet. I like your work.





countessa9000
countessa9000
02:58 Jul 23 2008

It's a really nice poem.








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