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loneliness in war!

00:03 Jan 28 2011
Times Read: 467


the loneliness that i feel

way down deep inside my heart,

has surrounded me in darkness

that is tearing me apart.



i am waiting on your call

but the phone in silence waits,

these pictures that i see

are too much to take.



the images i see

can't possibly be real,

only you can brighten my

the loneliness that i feel.



the loneliness within

passes through me like a knife,

i know you wont give up

with out putting up a fight.



i'm worried for you

and our son.

someday he'll know

what great things i've done.



but now the baby's crying

and the neighbors coming in,

nothing can subscribe

the loneliness within.



oh god! the phone is ringing

you're calling at last!

but your phone is slowly fading

your losing service fast.



don't leave me now i'm crying

but the only thing i hear,

is screaming in the background

and your fear.



i'm with you till the end

though i cannot see your face.

i comfort you with words

though i long for an embrace.



the screaming is getting louder

i hear a crash within,

the walls inside the building

are slowly caving in.



and now the torture's over

but the crying just began,

for now i have to cope with

the loneliness of one.


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Silverhawk
Silverhawk
03:27 Jan 29 2011

How terribly stressful to uphold dear...





 

tear stained face

06:20 Jan 27 2011
Times Read: 493


tears poured down,

as his words came out,

everything he said,

was just another doubt.



she was never good enough,

not even for him,

but now her dreams,

flew by, broken by a slur.



he said he loved her,

then took it right back!

he said he cared,

but said it to attack.



one tear at a time,

stained her pretty face.

no one knew she was so fragile,

like a thin piece of lace.



she stared at the knife,

as a tear hit the ground.

would she dare use it,

when it once spread her feelings around?



she used to cut but stopped,

and was happy for awhile.

but he killed her,

with his first smile!



she wondered why,

he would make her cry,

make her not want to live,

but die!



with a tear stained face,

she took her life,

killed herself,

with an already used knife.



she did it for love,

her tears said it all.

he was her depression,

when he pretended to fall!



no more tears,

on her stained face,

nothing left,

but her misery that took place!


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LadyRoslineDrake
LadyRoslineDrake
01:50 Jan 28 2011

I love them you can really feel the sorry and pain





Silverhawk
Silverhawk
03:30 Jan 29 2011

War, suicide and cutting...very serious-minded and much appreciated in their raw honesty. Thank you for sharing them.








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