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As I pondered, weak and weary,
Over many a bottle of spirits galore,
Suddenly there came a knocking at my door.
Startled, I rose to my feet,
Wondering who could it be,
And there stood before me, with a glimmering glow,
A bottle of Ciroc vodka, all aglow.
Its crystal clear body, so pristine,
Filled my eyes with a wondrous sheen,
As I uncorked it with a steady hand,
And poured myself a drink so grand.
The aroma, so sweet and light,
Filled my senses with delight,
As I took a sip, my soul took flight
To a world beyond my sight.
The smoothness of its texture,
Like a feather floating on the breeze,
Left me in a state of rapture,
And put my troubled mind at ease.
As I drank, I felt a strange sensation,
A mystical force of pure elation,
That lifted me up to the heavens above,
And filled my heart with boundless love.
Oh, Ciroc vodka, how you have stolen my heart,
With your allure that sets me apart,
From the mundane and the ordinary,
To a world of wonder and revelry.
In every sip, I taste the essence of life,
And all its joys, its sorrows, its strife,
And I know that with you by my side,
I can face anything that may betide.
So here's to you, my dearest friend,
Until the very end,
May we drink and revel in ecstasy,
And let our souls fly free.
I had an interaction with someone that left me feeling unsure of where I stand with them. I'm not sure if I offended or upset them, but something about our exchange made me feel as though I did.
Now, every time I think about that encounter, I can't help but feel a sense of awkwardness. I wish I could just brush it off, but I can't shake the feeling that something is off between us.
I know that communication is key in situations like this, but I'm not sure if it's appropriate to bring it up with them. I don't want to make things worse, but I also don't want to let this feeling linger.
It's times like these that I wish I had more confidence in my social skills. I always second-guess myself in these situations and end up feeling like I've made a mistake.
I hope that this feeling passes soon and that I can find a way to move forward without any lingering tension.
Until then, I'll just have to trust that things will work themselves out in due time.
Amidst the night's uncanny chill
I walked alone, so pale and still
No stars, no moon, no guiding light
Only the darkness, so black and tight
My heart was drowning in despair
My soul was shattered beyond repair
Desperate, I cried out to the sky
"Lord, please help me before I die!"
Then at once, a voice so sinister
It came from nowhere, a dark whisper
"Dear child, tell me what's wrong
For I can help with a deal so strong."
In the shadows, I saw a figure
With eyes that glow, so cold and trigger
The devil himself, in all his might
Offering me a deal, so tempting and bright
"I'll give you wealth, power, and fame
Make you a legend, and you'll never be the same
All you need to do, is kneel and pray
To me, your soul, I'll take away."
I felt the darkness pulling at my heart
The devil's words, tearing me apart
My mind and soul, a frenzied mess
Should I accept or fall to distress
Then I took a deep breath and spoke
"I'll make this deal, for I'm already broke
My soul, my heart, my life's a mess
I'll take the deal, and let my soul confess."
The devil grinned, a wicked smile
His eyes, dancing with dark beguile
The ritual began, in that darkest night
The devil took my soul, in plain sight
My life has changed, forevermore
A life of richness, power, and great allure
And I knew deep down, it was worth the price
For the devil had made all my dreams come to life
But now, I dread the sound of night
When the devil's voice, comes in like a fright
For in my heart, I'm forever enslaved
To the deal I made, that dark night, so brave.
'Twas midnight in the hour of the devil
The dark consumed my soul, gave me no revel
The stars refused to shine, my mind was fraught
With fear and loathing and the restlessness it brought
The witching hour had come once more
With its demons and monsters and ghosts of yore
And I, trapped in an unending nightmare
Unable to escape, nowhere to get some fresh air
The clock chimed three, a sound so eerie
As if the devil himself was drawing near me
The shadows danced around the silent room
As if preparing for an impending doom
The darkness enveloped me, a shroud so cold
It whispered of secrets that were never told
The fear inside, oh how it brewed
It consumed me whole, made me feel so subdued
I tossed and I turned, relentlessly
Trying to find comfort, a sense of safety
But the night, it had taken hold of me
Torturing my soul, felt like a banshee
The morning light, how I longed for it
The darkness too hard to bear, too hard to fit
But the night refused to release its hold
My body, my mind, it had taken control
I sat up in bed, drained and weary
The haunting fear, it had made me teary
The trees outside and the moon; an eerie glow
A world wrapped tight in a sinister show
The demons of night, the ones that haunt
It's so hard to let them go, so hard to vaunt
For when the sun rises, and the world is calm
The night before, it's forgotten and gone
But for me, the night has a vice-like grip
Made me its prisoner, made me trip
Over the fears and doubts and ghosts of old
My mind and soul, trapped in its fold
'Til the next night comes, and I lay still
Feeling the same unease, the same chill
The devil's hour always comes back
The world of my nightmares never slack.
As I lay in bed, eyes closed with fear,
The dark around me began to sear.
A nightmare, so vivid and so real
I couldn't tell if I was asleep or still.
In this dream, I saw a world so bleak,
My mind felt tormented, unable to speak.
Every limb felt heavy, weighed down with dread,
As if something dark had taken hold of my head.
The shadows danced, they flickered and flitted
A whisper on the wind, I felt so unwitted.
It felt like my own body was no longer mine,
And my soul from my being was starting to unwind.
The darkness closed in, suffocating me,
The world around me seemed to vapour and flee.
There was no light, no sound, no sign of life,
Only endless darkness that cut me like a knife.
I tried to scream, to run, or escape
But it felt like every move just sealed my fate.
The line between reality and dream, so thin
I couldn't tell apart the darkness outside and within.
As my eyes opened, heart racing like thunder,
It dawned on me that the nightmare was no longer under
It had taken hold of my mind and soul,
Leaving me to wonder, which world was the whole?
Were my eyes yet tricking me with fake things,
Or was the nightmare the true reality that clings?
I'll never know as the dark engulfed me once more,
A never-ending tale of dreams and reality's forevermore.
Once upon a midnight dreary,
Lay a man consumed with query,
The moonlight cast him in a pallid hue,
As he lay awake, dreaming of a life anew.
He tossed and turned, but could not sleep,
A demon in his head began to creep,
With every passing hour, the darkness grew,
Filling his mind with colors of deepest blue.
The clock tick-tocked its relentless tune,
A shrill scream of death, an impending doom,
The man's heart quickened, pounding in his chest,
Haunted by the thought of an eternal unrest.
The room grew colder, the air more thin,
The man grew weaker with each violent spin,
The dark and twisted thoughts began to race,
A cruel and relentless battle for inner space.
And as the shadows grew and whispers grew loud,
The man knew he was forever enshrouded in a cloud,
Of pain, and sorrow, and unanswered woos,
In this never-ending night, lost in his own muse.
The stars in the sky, seemed so far away,
As a doomed fate, began to have its way,
And in the silence of the deepest ocean blue,
Lies a man, forever unable to bid adieu.
COMMENTS
Well written and full of pain. I feel for you.
Adieu. Always loved that word.
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Vampirewitch39
18:22 Apr 30 2023
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