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Currently untitled

07:39 Mar 19 2018
Times Read: 556


Take me in your arms, my lady of the night
Calm this heart of mine, so very filled with fright
Dance with me my lady, across the stars of twilight
Give me one last kiss, before I leave this life

My trial is now over, I walk now with you
Know not where I'm going, but soon I will start anew
For death is not just the end, it's also a new beginning
So do not waste time mourning, for I'll rejoin you soon

Totally unplanned poem that just came into mind while I was remembering the old days in high school and believe it or not it's still cheerier and joyful compared to what I used to pop up with.


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Suubi
Suubi
08:38 Mar 19 2018

Fascinating to see what flows out of our fingertips as it's written. I do that all the time with my poems. Goodwork.





Ladymindy
Ladymindy
10:40 Mar 19 2018

I like this





RavenStormrider
RavenStormrider
10:43 Mar 19 2018

Thanks again from what I saw you are more skilled than I am





Ladymindy
Ladymindy
13:29 Mar 19 2018

Aww thanks.





AbsintheandBlood
AbsintheandBlood
18:09 Mar 19 2018

Really nice poem





Dakotah
Dakotah
23:33 Mar 19 2018

Another great poem my friend. :)





XSalistaX
XSalistaX
15:54 Mar 20 2018

Very nicely written!





RavenStormrider
RavenStormrider
16:07 Mar 20 2018

Thank you both very much I appreciate it





DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
05:17 Mar 26 2018

Very beautiful piece indeed bravo! Wonderfully written as well done.





 

Untitled poem

21:28 Mar 15 2018
Times Read: 575


a bippity boppity boo
I've come to snuggle you
you can not flee i'm too fluffy
you can't resist the cute

just a short nonsense poem I thought up while being harassed by a puppy


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Ladymindy
Ladymindy
23:23 Mar 15 2018

Lol it's cute





RavenStormrider
RavenStormrider
23:25 Mar 15 2018

lol thanks





Suubi
Suubi
08:39 Mar 19 2018

Very unique and yes cute, hehe.





 

A new day (poem)

06:41 Mar 15 2018
Times Read: 611


Why do we hate, this world in which we live?
So irate, yet we give it all we have to give.
Why do we bow, broken and beaten to the ground?

Raise your heads and look to the skies
Spit in the face of all their lies
Wipe the tears from your bloodshot eyes
and watch as the sun begins to rise
begin anew my friends
for yesterday is gone and today is a new day


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Cultwatch
Cultwatch
06:44 Mar 15 2018

Good poem





RavenStormrider
RavenStormrider
06:46 Mar 15 2018

hahaha my random thoughts came out in my typing and I jumbled the last bit to hell and back with my first posting, rusty doesn't begin to cover how far my skills have fallen. They're completely gone but already my poems are nothing in feeling as they were when I was writing years ago so let's see what we get shall we?





Dakotah
Dakotah
08:11 Mar 15 2018

Love your poem, it reminds me of this quote from Shakespeare, "Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none."
-William Shakespeare





RavenStormrider
RavenStormrider
08:48 Mar 15 2018

Thank you I will have to look that up later as it is unfamiliar to me.





Dakotah
Dakotah
08:51 Mar 15 2018

Its refreshing to see someone write a positive poem for a change.





Suubi
Suubi
08:40 Mar 19 2018

There's always going to be a journey in the course of the poem. Let it have it's own end. I don't believe you've jumbled up the last bit at all.








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