Take me in your arms, my lady of the night
Calm this heart of mine, so very filled with fright
Dance with me my lady, across the stars of twilight
Give me one last kiss, before I leave this life
My trial is now over, I walk now with you
Know not where I'm going, but soon I will start anew
For death is not just the end, it's also a new beginning
So do not waste time mourning, for I'll rejoin you soon
Totally unplanned poem that just came into mind while I was remembering the old days in high school and believe it or not it's still cheerier and joyful compared to what I used to pop up with.
a bippity boppity boo
I've come to snuggle you
you can not flee i'm too fluffy
you can't resist the cute
just a short nonsense poem I thought up while being harassed by a puppy
COMMENTS
Lol it's cute
lol thanks
Very unique and yes cute, hehe.
Why do we hate, this world in which we live?
So irate, yet we give it all we have to give.
Why do we bow, broken and beaten to the ground?
Raise your heads and look to the skies
Spit in the face of all their lies
Wipe the tears from your bloodshot eyes
and watch as the sun begins to rise
begin anew my friends
for yesterday is gone and today is a new day
COMMENTS
Good poem
hahaha my random thoughts came out in my typing and I jumbled the last bit to hell and back with my first posting, rusty doesn't begin to cover how far my skills have fallen. They're completely gone but already my poems are nothing in feeling as they were when I was writing years ago so let's see what we get shall we?
Love your poem, it reminds me of this quote from Shakespeare, "Love all, trust a few, do wrong to none."
-William Shakespeare
Thank you I will have to look that up later as it is unfamiliar to me.
Its refreshing to see someone write a positive poem for a change.
There's always going to be a journey in the course of the poem. Let it have it's own end. I don't believe you've jumbled up the last bit at all.
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Suubi
08:38 Mar 19 2018
Fascinating to see what flows out of our fingertips as it's written. I do that all the time with my poems. Goodwork.
Ladymindy
10:40 Mar 19 2018
I like this
RavenStormrider
10:43 Mar 19 2018
Thanks again from what I saw you are more skilled than I am
Ladymindy
13:29 Mar 19 2018
Aww thanks.
AbsintheandBlood
18:09 Mar 19 2018
Really nice poem
Dakotah
23:33 Mar 19 2018
Another great poem my friend. :)
XSalistaX
15:54 Mar 20 2018
Very nicely written!
RavenStormrider
16:07 Mar 20 2018
Thank you both very much I appreciate it
DarkestTemptation
05:17 Mar 26 2018
Very beautiful piece indeed bravo! Wonderfully written as well done.