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The Handsome Angel and The Lovely Maiden.

06:16 Sep 05 2008
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Once upon a time there was a Beautiful young maiden Let me tell you she was lovely as the sun setting on a cool autumns day. The little maiden had Cherry red lips, and rose petal soft skin and hair like a silken thread. She had snow white skin, whiter than a swans and small delicate feet so tiny they could walk a mile and compared to normal feet it would seem like half.

Well long ago the lovely little maiden was a lonely girl. Her only possession was beautiful green leather dancing shoes. Oh and how she loved to dance in them she’d twirl and spring about like no other could with such grace and beauty it was breath taking. Though she only danced at night during the full moon for she was an orphan and she would risk getting caught by the orphanage owner. So the little maiden only went out once every moon cycle and only on the full moon for it was the most beautiful night of all.

One evening the little maiden snuck out to do her dancing like she had done many a times before but this night was different because this time someone was watch the little maiden. It was an angel! He was so handsome with brown hair like a horses main and voice so warm it were as if a million song birds were singing when he spoke. The handsome angel had pure white wings soft as a baby kitten’s fur. The Handsome angels name was a secret to all those but god and himself for he was not to tell anyone or they would have to go to heaven with him before their time.

The handsome angel was awed by the lovely maiden’s beauty and her dancing how her hair twirled and sparkled in the moon light. After the lovely Maiden had finished and headed home the handsome angel was sad to see her go for he had fallen in love with her.

The next day the angel sheathed his wings and snuck into the orphanage and up to the maiden’s room. He was pleased to see her green dancing shoes in a box under her bed. So to see the maiden again the angel stole her shoes and left her a note bidding her to him. When the maiden came to her room and found the shoes to be gone she was heart broken but when she saw the note she turned very angry instead. The maiden ran to find the angel and in the woods they met.

“Lovely maiden I am an angel and I have stolen your shoes for I must see you again. For I have fallen in love with you.”

The lovely maiden was shocked for she had never been loved by any one other than her mother. “Oh my!” She said “Handsome angel if what you say is true than I shall love you back but6 in return you must give me my shoes for the are my only prised procession in this cruel world.”

The Handsome angel was thrilled and gladly gave the lovely maiden her shoes back and gave her a sweet kiss. The angel smiled. “lovely maiden what is your name?’ He asked with such radiance the lovely maiden almost cried.

“my name is ophilia!” She replied “What is yours handsome angel?”

The handsome angel began to cry “Oh lovely maiden I cannot tell you or you will die and be sent to god before it is time!”

The lovely maiden smiled to the Angels surprise. “That is okay my angel for as long as I am with you everything will be okay!” She beamed.

The angel sighed “My name is Konaha, lovely maiden.”

Upon hear the angel’s name she died for a sword plunged through the sky into the top of her head skewering her. Oh how the angel wept. But then the ghost of the lovely maiden appeared lovelier than ever. She smiled to the angel and said lets go to the gates of


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ravenvampire
ravenvampire
03:53 Sep 10 2008

U did so good on this let me know if you are going to add more.








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