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Unfinished Business

23:33 Jul 17 2010
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So, I was looking through some old stuff of mine from back in HS and I find this poem that I was apparently working on...so be kind...this unfinished poem is over 15 yrs old...lol





The best things in life aren't easy

at least, that's what people say



I used to understand that phrase

that is, until today



You make me cry with happy tears

you keep my fears at bay



You make me smile; you make me laugh

each and every day.



I have 4 more lines but they are out of synche. The flow is backwards





You always know just what to say

to make each day a perfect one



Even when the sky is gray

your smile to me is like the sun.


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Fizbop
Fizbop
06:06 Jul 18 2010

very nice





BelovedxTwilight
BelovedxTwilight
06:36 Jul 18 2010

I guess I am going to have to put some more work in to it and finish it 19 years later! LoL





BunesUth
BunesUth
06:45 Jul 18 2010

Beautiful hun x





DeathEater
DeathEater
08:12 Jul 24 2010

That is how I am sometimes with my poems!

I like your a lot better than mine though!





BelovedxTwilight
BelovedxTwilight
08:14 Jul 24 2010

awww ty :)





MasterMel2
MasterMel2
06:48 Oct 31 2010

Very nice








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