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Lost Night

05:47 Oct 18 2008
Times Read: 574


I've prepared and taken my time

To sweet talk Destiny

And fill her mind

With tiny thoughts of mine.



She sees her way through

To my kitchen door

She does not knock, there's no need

I knew it was her, my bitter Destiny



I force with might to see my way

Silvered tongue, filled with greed

Smiling and flirting, persuading away



She laughs and grins

And then begins

To explain to me

My own days.



She thanked me for her dinner and left

Though, it was her will,

Which allowed me her presence at all.

It was all her doing and so will it be...

Son of a bitch, that fucking Destiny.


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17:31 Oct 17 2008
Times Read: 602


Morbid thoughts ran through my mind

Of Hate and Haste, and of all mankind

I could not see no other night

For my future bent on only fight



All were dead and all were gone,

My mortality in question as I move on.

I stumbled through and over men

Who laid before me in their bed.



Hate and fight and hate and fight

Raged with every step

Until I fell upon my knees and held

My hands within my head.



My soul left through tears of loss

No longer did I carry a cross.

No longer was my vigilance

Bent forever on vengeance.



They feel as well, all I loved

Time has torn them all

They have died before me in this mortal place

With their own battle against father time.



A sea of dead stretch out before me

Against my lonely knees

I screamed in pain and in fright

As I was alone with the dead in that darken night.









This with the help of vampirewitch39


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Of Others

03:20 Oct 15 2008
Times Read: 617


Whispered sounds of darkened air...

The hint of something evil.

Bound by rules of human land.

To be me, I am unable.



Ever watching for the signs..

Of others who do struggle.

Gifted by one sweet cry

Of pain and her pleasure



I find I cry

Only for ...

Others amongst the muggles.



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With Me

16:06 Oct 12 2008
Times Read: 630


With effect I sway and move

With guided steps to improve

My advance toward you is near complete

Just before you are at my feet



When you weep

I see your tears

As how you express

All of your fears



Yet you keep your pose

As your eyes then close

Fearing to watch from your position

Your own failure to oppose



... your own submission


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Vampirewitch39
Vampirewitch39
16:15 Oct 12 2008

Submission or gift?



Wonderful work. :)





winterdarkmoon
winterdarkmoon
17:19 Oct 17 2008

beautiful





 

The Steward

19:05 Oct 11 2008
Times Read: 657


Implying forward movement..

backwards trends

circles of motion

and trampling on end.



His strings move swiftly,

one step ahead.

Your hopeful and helpful..

whimsicly in your head.



Your glad to abide

and be near my side

simply because...

I own you.


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Isis101
Isis101
06:00 Oct 12 2008

I like this one too...





AlexandraAshes
AlexandraAshes
09:09 Oct 12 2008

Aaaahhh!!!

Finally someone that can actually write some decent poetry.

I very much look forward to more, and I promise my comments will run deeper than..."gee, I like it."



Thank you!



Respect,

Alexandra.





 

The Savant

16:52 Oct 11 2008
Times Read: 660


Ideas whisper in a darkened night

the flight of words

the plight of fight.

within these walls no man can see

the words of wisdom I foresee



I'll live alone with all this hate

for the bantering and mischieve

of all man's greed.



I'll fool and doddle and live alone

in the darkend night huddled

and cold



It's the shivering of loneliness

which I'll live through eternity

For no man can see

...my misery

.... and my fight.


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demonlovesyou
demonlovesyou
19:38 Oct 11 2008

ah lovely poemms lovely flow of rhyme...

i m fond of reading poems and your lovely poems makes me your fan...





Isis101
Isis101
06:00 Oct 12 2008

powerful - very nice








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