I've prepared and taken my time
To sweet talk Destiny
And fill her mind
With tiny thoughts of mine.
She sees her way through
To my kitchen door
She does not knock, there's no need
I knew it was her, my bitter Destiny
I force with might to see my way
Silvered tongue, filled with greed
Smiling and flirting, persuading away
She laughs and grins
And then begins
To explain to me
My own days.
She thanked me for her dinner and left
Though, it was her will,
Which allowed me her presence at all.
It was all her doing and so will it be...
Son of a bitch, that fucking Destiny.
Morbid thoughts ran through my mind
Of Hate and Haste, and of all mankind
I could not see no other night
For my future bent on only fight
All were dead and all were gone,
My mortality in question as I move on.
I stumbled through and over men
Who laid before me in their bed.
Hate and fight and hate and fight
Raged with every step
Until I fell upon my knees and held
My hands within my head.
My soul left through tears of loss
No longer did I carry a cross.
No longer was my vigilance
Bent forever on vengeance.
They feel as well, all I loved
Time has torn them all
They have died before me in this mortal place
With their own battle against father time.
A sea of dead stretch out before me
Against my lonely knees
I screamed in pain and in fright
As I was alone with the dead in that darken night.
This with the help of vampirewitch39
Whispered sounds of darkened air...
The hint of something evil.
Bound by rules of human land.
To be me, I am unable.
Ever watching for the signs..
Of others who do struggle.
Gifted by one sweet cry
Of pain and her pleasure
I find I cry
Only for ...
Others amongst the muggles.
With effect I sway and move
With guided steps to improve
My advance toward you is near complete
Just before you are at my feet
When you weep
I see your tears
As how you express
All of your fears
Yet you keep your pose
As your eyes then close
Fearing to watch from your position
Your own failure to oppose
... your own submission
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Submission or gift?
Wonderful work. :)
beautiful
Implying forward movement..
backwards trends
circles of motion
and trampling on end.
His strings move swiftly,
one step ahead.
Your hopeful and helpful..
whimsicly in your head.
Your glad to abide
and be near my side
simply because...
I own you.
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I like this one too...
Aaaahhh!!!
Finally someone that can actually write some decent poetry.
I very much look forward to more, and I promise my comments will run deeper than..."gee, I like it."
Thank you!
Respect,
Alexandra.
Ideas whisper in a darkened night
the flight of words
the plight of fight.
within these walls no man can see
the words of wisdom I foresee
I'll live alone with all this hate
for the bantering and mischieve
of all man's greed.
I'll fool and doddle and live alone
in the darkend night huddled
and cold
It's the shivering of loneliness
which I'll live through eternity
For no man can see
...my misery
.... and my fight.
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ah lovely poemms lovely flow of rhyme...
i m fond of reading poems and your lovely poems makes me your fan...
powerful - very nice
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