I look left as the slim brunette with prominent cheeks and brown eyes walks out of the door and to the floor of the seat, as she steps of the train; and it does my brain in that I can see a banana skin there and, a bottle of Buxton mineral water on the seat and think how ironic, that food born to eat as healthy, by someone who is conscious of what they put in themselves, is left as rubbish by such an attractive litterbug…
It’s always hard to find a card that says what you want to say.
So you stand there perusing, as you do: meeting others, all with the same issue.
“If you can find one that says, ‘you’re a pain in the ass, but I love you,” says you, to the attractive brunette in blue-jeans, who smiles and say, “I’m just the same.”
It’s just, that either the words seems right; or the image doesn’t suit, yet rarely can you find the one that does the deed.
Then finally, needless to say, when you do find one, that means something to you take it to the till, to pay your bill and the fellow says, “That’ll be…” and, by then you’ll pay whatever he might say, ‘coz to dwell there any longer, would just ruin your day.
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not to mention I finally make a decision and I am waiting in line to pay...reading it as I wait and when I finally get up there to pay.... I changed my mind lol
great pen. :)
I love this!
*shoebox greetings are usually the best cards for these occasions*
I cease my pace as I’m not in a race, so stop and look around me, an there’s pine-cones, pine-cones everywhere, even in my hair I find, as one lands in my hair I find, as one lands with a distinct thud and, I’m glad it wasn’t a bottle of Bud.
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Yikes, lol. Im sure glad it wasn't as well. :P
might a slip in a few words???
you are lucky it wasn't bird turds....
lol
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Thats whatchya get for buying that cheap paper! Its Charmin megaroll all the way in this household.
Lol Nice touch Angelus!
LMAO...this is an interesting little read right here. :P
Half-caste and tall, with shoulder length
brown air and eyes; a long back in a fringe
beige-waistcoat over a tee and, long legs
poured into spray-on blue-jeans; and, as she
stood at the doors, prior to them opening and,
I’d figured, there and then, she was the most
attractive young woman I’d seen, all day.
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must be a lot of lovely ladies in merry ole England, just like I know how lovely you are!! ~*smiles*
“I can’t speak now, I’m on the train.,” the
young lady in a grey baggy track-suit says,
her shape within truly evidence that she
rarely sees much exercise. And, her voice
is loud, so all in the carriage can hear her say,
“I can’t talk now,” then, for the next three stops
or so, as she exits the door and, my jaw hits the
floor, as she says, “I’ll see you, in two minutes.”
Deafened by headphones, the young fella can’t hear me say to him, ‘where are you going?’ as he walks toward me, weaving to the left and right, while peering at his at his mobiles screen, in the bright light.
Revenge they say, is best served cold;
yet I believe one’s wish for sweet
satisfaction is best served hot, one’s
enmity, toward an adversary, kept
bound, coiled and, on a long slower
simmer; yet that suppressed rage is
held at bay, until, one’s need can
finally be satisfied.
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NoctusAngelusProcella
14:54 Jun 29 2011
lol