"Am grinning an not in third person, but rather, in first. And as poetry goes, this is some of the worst."
When I went out for a whiskey, with a friend
I learnt stuff of me, which illuminated my vision
~ didn't know I still get so nervous, at times.
~ didn't know I still felt so vulnerable, at times.
Or even, that my chip, is a chip shop, still.
‘Nothing ever changes and the song remains the same,’ sang Coverdale, on his Northwinds album; an soft-rock is passé; except it seems if you’re Led Zeppelin, who used that line again, an ‘The Song Remains The Same’.
Before a guy deigns to criticise
someone, he should first look
in a mirror that tells no lies: ‘coz
then before he talks of the length
of a skirt, or a shirt with buttons
undone, more than testosterone
will allow; they might just come
to realise the depth of their own
personal shallow.
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WaitsForTheMoon
14:06 Jun 12 2010
funny