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00:53 Aug 18 2009
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If I awoke screaming,

Would you hush me?

If I cried out in pain,

Would you heal me?



I hear your voice,

It soothes my aching head.

While your gentle eyes

Haunt me like the dead.



If only you knew

If only you saw.

I'll lie to you

And break our laws.



Sometimes I think

If dreams were real

Most surely I know

They would kill



But you are here

Then you are gone

Come back please

Don't be long



I drabble and drag on

And rant and curse

But trust me dearies

You haven't seen the worst



And so I'll finish

This random poem

Because if I don't

Well...Its already a s**tty poem


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MBK
MBK
01:01 Aug 18 2009

It's not shitty, Rach. You did very well with the rhyme scheme and making it flow easily. :)





xgrumpyx
xgrumpyx
14:20 Aug 25 2009

I agree, great writing.








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