Losing all Reason
Verse 1:
It’s late on Monday night,
The blood still stains my hands,
I must have lost this fight,
You’ve killed my sight,
I can’t sleep at night,
These thoughts are haunting my dreams,
Killing me inside,
I’ll take a good look at my past,
And see that I was always right.
Chorus:
I still want you,
Now more than ever,
How can I go on,
When we’ll never be together.
You’ve ripped me apart,
Over and over again,
You ripped me apart,
Now we’ll never know,
Verse 2:
Still all alone at night,
I shut the door,
And turn out the light,
In my dreams I die each night,
Like the hurt I feel inside,
I’ll take a good look at my past,
And see that I was always right.
Chorus:
I still want you,
Now more than ever,
How can I go on,
When we’ll never be together.
You’ve ripped me apart,
Over and over again,
You ripped me apart,
Now we’ll never know.
Second installment guys and galls!! A song I wrote in January, and this is a true story......
This one is also not finnished, it needs a lot more lyrics, and i'll finnish it off the next time I feel suicidal from asking out a lass and getting rejected..........
Same as last time though!! If you have any suggestions about the song, feel free to message me, all help is appreciated..........
Gravitation
I dream for the day that you bless my footsteps,
Drawn into the dying sunlight,
That resides in my deep dark soul.
I dream of the time that you accept me as human,
Allow me to feel once again,
Now come invade my deep dark soul.
Chorus:
Reaching through the shadow,
To draw you into my fire,
I’ll let you help me from the flames,
But you have to be willing,
Can you really live with this chasm,
And finally decide to be with the gravitation with or without me.
Can you not see what your uncertainty is causing,
Breaking out of my cell alone,
To find all of the reasons why.
I know that this world has completely failed me,
And I’ll be alone all along,
Searching for the reasons why.
Chorus:
Reaching through the shadow,
To draw you into my fire,
I’ll let you help me from the flames,
But you have to be willing,
Can you really live with this chasm,
And finally decide to be with the gravitation with or without me.
During solo:
I am still trying to find the reason to stay,
Do you really deserve my love,
Or my time at all.
I don’t see anymore why I should hide,
Just let out all of the feelings inside,
And scream “I’ll see you in hell”.
Hey all, first song posted :-D Just written!! So obviously needs a lot more work, if you want to contribute or give any advice message me and it will be welcome...........
Additions im planning on making soon are:
1. Re-write the 2nd chorus, so at the end of the song I can go back and sing 2nd chorus and then 1st chorus, to finnish.
2. Get maybe a more vocal outro??? Throwing some more lyrics in as the guitar fades out......
3. The actual music to go along to it, im planning on a "Octavarium - Dream Theater" layout.... if you listen to that song anyways...............
I will be changing this as time goes on, because this is no where NEAR my best work..... so yaknow...... Anyways, thanks for looking!! :-D
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