Total Vanomus
15:49 Jan 04 2009
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Total Vanomus
Flood of venom inside me, this's the self side me
Slept desires rise in a loneliness & rides on me
Thousands of snakes, more poisonous than vipers,
Sharp venom and fangs of king cobra's inside me
The magma of the venom & the poison of desire,
Eh, keep away from me, am mad at the stranger,
Impassioned desires love you, keep away from me,
My burning attachment will burn you to join me.
My waking, my senses, my love, my attachment,
All to you, afraid I lose you, devil is inside me!
Love joining you, all the senses I devoted to you,
But still fear strange, unfamiliar to me, with me!
Fire inside loves learning, quest stings sharp bite,
You the visitor, to have wings, am depends on you…
COMMENTS
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TaintedAngel14
22:31 Jan 09 2009
wow..its really good, i like it =3 hope you write more soon!
venumstings
08:16 Jan 10 2009
(Bows in reverence)
Thanks for the booster.
I Will...
Airianna
18:13 Jan 14 2009
love it
Angelus
00:37 Jan 29 2009
.. you are a lilting wordsmith fella, painting pictures of the tangible and not; with an achingly good use of the language.
venumstings
19:06 Jan 31 2009
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Thanks for
Lovely most comment!
Thanks for the booster. I loved thy comment… I will create more such easy poems.
I did not see picture while making poem they are added later except one poem “Charm to Feast” Charm to Feast is ekphrazis and others are not made on pictures. I did not see the picture at the time of making poem. Poems are subject base and with construct of metaphors. I have decorated them with picture to make them more beautiful.
Ha-ha only poems are mine and pictures are moving on net of other class artists. I can not make good picture art and always have to borrow art pictures from some one else.
VampLady22
09:36 Nov 01 2009
I like this one alot :)
venumstings
13:34 Nov 01 2009
(Bows)
Thanks for your appreciation...
In future I will write more poems like this peom...