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I am at a stand still at how I should approach the next climax into my ultimate ending. I want her to be apart of a high counsel. Perhaps a long lost royalty? Of such matters Ferrah should be so important and her power should be the power to govern. She has unawaringly highened a Rakshasas powers and beaconed him to her. She is a Queen of sorts. She will reign soon. But not in this story. It is of her pain and damage that I am titling this story Damn-edged. Her bloody hands will soon fill with power and triumph over all who do her wrong. No enemy of hers will be safe until she is safe at last in Malikai's arms.

m thinking I need much more description for older Briella. What does a ginger haired lady look like when she gets older? The picture is lost inside my head. Am hoping Chapter 8 has more detail and I want to bring out a better description of what Ferrah's wings look like. I know it's over due, but I'm working on it.

As I'm trying to set up the characteristics of a Rakshasas for Malikai or Marichi. Who in Hindu religion really was a Rakshasas. I'm unsure if he was suppose to be male or female, my searches are unconclusive since some say he's male and married with a kid. Which is fine since it was so long ago and as we all know marriages don't last forever. And Rakshasas are known for taking off with beautiful women. hehe...



But I need to establish the idea that Briella is a mythical creature herself. She's a Brownie, but the only Brownies I've read about are Laurell K Hamilton's version in her Merry Gentry fairy princess series. I don't like the hobgoblin idea that hollywood has portrayed so I'm feeling that Briella will be a modern Brownie that has gone past living and hiding within a families home. She has her own job working only at night as a Nurse at a nursing home.



The sites I have in mind for these are close to home. Iowa. Ames Iowa. And I will eventually get to the fact that Malikai took Ferrah/Angel to Madrid Iowa which are only 10 or so miles apart from each other. An easy run for a Rakshasas.