falling to floor
being a not like before
being up and about
I used to be able to laugh and shout
now looking at the lights
as slowly the night
creeps in
all around me is sin
but this light just shines
showing I am all the sign
that I am dead
knowing I had bled
to death
knowing I took my final breath
as I slowly walk
feeling like rock
from side to side
as I seem to glide
seeing parts of my life
as I collide
with the light
feeling excite
and fear and confusing from the light
and feeling the fright
COMMENTS
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evilsandwich
23:18 Jun 29 2009
awesome ^_^
KinkyLilVamp
02:13 Sep 23 2009
i like it :)
MisUnderStood09
19:02 Dec 16 2009
cool poem! loved your use of diction! clever! :)
FadedMemory1024
21:52 Mar 22 2010
Wow this is an amazing poem. pretty simple but it has meaning.
Bloodrose19
19:55 Jul 14 2010
wow beatiful read mine kay
deathangelsdarkrose
22:58 Dec 19 2011
I like it :)