As my life rotates
My emotions in a state
As I seeing what I could have been
Looking at my life through this broken video screen
I wish I was safe
Keeping the faith
I want to be risen on angel’s wings
But my heart will never sing
Broken from the pain
And I will never be the same
In this suitcase where my secrets are held
Blood dripping where it fell
But now my work is cast
As demon reemerge from my past
They will never let me be
Until I allow someone to see
COMMENTS
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Missfortuneate
11:07 Jan 24 2008
I love how it flows, and hope that in time things will work out for you.
evildollbj
11:09 Jan 31 2008
wow your realy good.
ByteMiAss
20:13 Feb 01 2008
wow.
why not write and stuff more in here?
xcrimsonlustx
16:11 Feb 12 2008
I like it! ;)=
spaz53
15:38 Feb 20 2008
i love it so much!!!!!
gothhottie171
19:21 Mar 01 2008
Very deep but i can defenitly relate!! even though what your saying isnt i think this is beautiful
AMANxGEKKANI
19:57 Mar 08 2008
oh my, this is wonderful.
i dont know what you were thinking when you said you weren't good a writing, you are talented.
i would really wish to read more, tell me when you get more on VR.
aquababy62
11:33 Apr 06 2008
this ones realy good, try poetry,com, if they like iy when you inter there contest, they might publish it, they did one of mine in there book?!
missmasochist
19:11 Apr 27 2008
nicely done!
RavenLucifera666
22:57 Apr 29 2008
I love it.
minikitti
19:58 Apr 30 2008
i love your poems they are real good as your personal ones to espically of the guys wanting to sleep around
deamonfayrie
20:15 Jul 03 2008
pretty good.....your a talented writer
darkvampiregirl
17:15 Jul 21 2008
i loved it
bloodytearsoflonlieness
21:24 Aug 07 2008
hun i lovvve this one its .............idk the words to use
u can allow me to see
deathangelsdarkrose
01:59 Jun 20 2009
i like it :)