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poems

22:33 Aug 04 2010
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ok here some poems they have some error but i hope you like them still



one cut



cut the ties of this world with one cut

take my pain away with one cut

along with all the confused memories

let me sink into the darkness

let the warm red water flow from my arms

the light is confusing and not as still

the dark is there with just a cut

no more fear no more suffering

no more having to be someone i am not

let me into the darkness with one cut

let me cut this tie to the world

all i need is one cut





the puppet



I pull on you like the puppet master pull the string on the his puppet

you do what I command

willingly? Never

I pull you in the way you do not want

in the end you will be the same

same as all the puppets

you will not even know what is going on

you will put on a show that will be remembered by ever one

you can try to kill yourself but I pull on your strings

I will let you kill the one you love

and show you the way of true pain

and you will wish you never had seen me

I look as good as gold but I am like evil hiding in plain sit

you would still be my puppet

my puppet will never be the same

all deaths are slow and pain full

you would not die until I am done with you

you will regret every thing you will do

just remember I made you do them

you will die by the time you find out how to get out

you will be yell your wish to die when you live

and you will be yelling your wish to live as you die

you will be one of many that have been in this

you are not the last

the last will come

I will be here until there is no one that will follow

what is being done to you will be for ever

as your friends turn on you

your family will not be far from doing the same

you will stay with me for ever

no matter how I pull your strings

I am the like the puppet master and you are the puppet

you will do the dance of the puppet

never willing



this one i dont have a name for yet



did you love me

do you now or did you use me just to play with

and now you call just for to clean you pipes and say it was bad

even when i know the truth

you like it more then me

you like and i was the one that was board

i heard no lies when i bedded with you

now you make me think was it a misstake trusting you

even when my friend told me not to

and you so called friend said you cheated on me

for i know not what reason they would lie to me

but i lessened to you as you said you did not

even win i was truthful to the very end i don't know if you were

i would like to know for i did all i could to help you even thou i could not see you i find i was blind to see what you do

i talked to you day and night

sleeping only when you told me to

and when it came to an i thought i would die

but know i have a new life and you have help make it

when i seemed heartless i was full of pain and i thought you would come back to me but i see that my mind had lied to me for you do not want me

i have mad it thou you and your saying of return but i move on for the kid you knew to a mane that is not afraid to lose a love that is trying to change me for you the first to change me and the last

you will see braking up with me was bad idea for i know i still love you

for you made me strong and now i love some one that likes me for me

i walk beside her now and help her when she need it for you thou now you will need to wait for me as the sun wait for the moon to fall

the moon is beautiful and so is the sun but right now the moon is right the light it give is greater beautiful beauty and the sun has to work 1000 time harder to get the same beauty but the moon is still up and the sun can not be seen for this the time for the moon to shin


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BloodyJack
BloodyJack
00:26 Aug 06 2010

Nice poetry, though I felt that One Cut "flowed" best. *evil grin*

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