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ok, i fibbed a bit lol, this was actually my first poem, so just add 1 to the others until i fix :) its called "The one i love"
00:35 Mar 07 2007
Times Read: 547
The one I love
She is the special one
The one that saved me from near certain suicide
Whether it was to be mentally or physically
She saved me
When I first met the one
I was a very lost and confused person
Yet almost instantly
The one managed to lift me up
She saved me
The soul was lost
And the hurt was painful
Serious damage had been done
A complete and utter wreck
She saved me
The one touched my heart
She touched my soul
Although not much left
She found it with ease
She saved me
Sudden magic flowed
From both the one and myself
Within hours although it seemed less
My love was like an exploding star
She saved me
She makes me laugh
She makes me smile
She gives me butterflies
She gives me tingles
She saved me
This girl is the one
I know it’s true
You’re in my heart and in my soul
Forever and always
You saved me
This is my second bad attempt at poetry called "Guardian Angels"
00:13 Mar 07 2007
Times Read: 550
I once was a mess
And for reasons unknown
The time was bleak
And my thoughts confused
In this state of turmoil
I met a person
And although it was our first meeting
We clicked just like that
In recent times
Things have changed
I’m now happy
And wish the same on this person
If i could do just 1 thing in this life
It would be to make this person happy once more
I feel i do and can make this happen
For you see, she is the one for me
A special person
My guardian angel
I hope to stay that way for life
So my beloved
If i can but do 1 thing for you
You name and by god i will do it
For you are worth it, not just now but always
You mean the world to me
And to others i know
Please don’t give up
As i will not give up on you
Even though you self declared your guardianship of me
You helped me more than you know
Please stay in my life, forever
The person this was meant for never recieved this, but seems to be the way lately
My first awful poem attempt called "Almost Lost"
00:05 Mar 07 2007
Times Read: 551
I once met a girl,
Who, from the moment we met,
It seemed destiny,
To be forever, in each other’s arms.
Things were great,
And looking better each day,
Then something happened,
That caused a great deal of pain.
One problem led to another
And before we knew what had been said
Things got heated
And put to bed
Life suddenly turned bleak
And I knew instantly, what I had lost
As the bleak weeks started to pass by
I wished and I hoped to have back what I lost
Then something happened
A message received
A reply was sent
And i sat wishing and hoping
All of a sudden another message
Things started to look up
And although i was scared
At what might be said
We had to talk, and talk we did
After a while of tears and pain
I had back what i had first lost
My world again revolves around her
For that makes me the happiest person i know and see
I try not to take for granted
What i had, and now have again
But again in my life, I’m happy
I can accept changes, as no one is perfect
But damn if i know that from this point on
I almost lost you, i hope never again
My love, you mean the world to me
You have my heart and my soul
Forever and always, for you to keep
I love you, always
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