What have I lost?
As i Breath in This tar from the east
I Exhale...
from a far away land you hail
seems like i rolled the dice to many times
what have i really lost?
what will I really loose
is there more to gain
to let go of this pain
my nature calls
the dragon speaks
do i stay
or do i dare to follow
my darkest dreams
as inhale your lovely scent
i contemplate my fate
the night is calling
but i wait
and just exhale my worries.
COMMENTS
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jahlovleyone
22:03 Jan 01 2009
Nice Writing skills! Beautiful!
Sinfullydelicious
21:05 Jan 25 2009
wow, your really talented
iam
05:30 Apr 12 2009
thanks guys... i never would have though that i was good at this kinda thing.
DarkFeline
07:11 Jul 08 2009
This is very good - love it!