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dont know what to call this
10:17 Sep 04 2010
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yeah I know, this should be in storys, but its more

personal to me wit everything Iv been going through

She never like empty rooms and now she finds herself walking into one. An empty, small apartment with bare, white walls, outlines where posters and photos used to hang. Slowly walking through the apartment with her fingertips on the wall she comes to where a hole was punched in, with a single finger she follows the perfect outline of knuckles observing and thin wondering what cause that to happen thin contuses walking into the small kitchen with nothing left but some old beer bottles left in the sink. With that she turns around and walks to where the bedroom. Stopping in front of the closed door she puts a hand on it and looks down at her feet, letting out a long soft sigh. With the feeling like someone is watching her she looks up and behind her into the dark cold empty bathroom. Thinking to herself "nothing in there but the person in the mirror" with that she turns around to the bedroom door, grabs the doorknob and turns it and slowly opens the door.

The faint hope of seeing him sitting there on his bed reading or drawing something while listening to music. but with the door open she finds it is empty like all the other rooms though its somewhat darker and warmer thin the rest.

Looking down she can see the outline where the furniture used to be, stains from fake blood, and cigarette burns here and there on the dark carpet. She notices a black shirt left behind in a corner of the room walks over and picks it up, worn out and faded. She lifts it to to her nose. His sweet sent still left in it. Memories flash through her mind of him, all the good times, things, and his face.

she lets go of the shirt and lets it fall to the floor. She looks at her hands as if they have been covered in blood, knowing all the hurt and pain she caused and put him through. She starts to cry as she sits on the floor and covers her face with her hands knowing that hes never going to want her back and that he is gone

COMMENTS

rosie
11:05 Sep 04 2010

omg....im sorry hun..this is a great writing though....but im sorry you have been through so much. life is hard..and those who messed up sometimes cant be forgiven...time will come when there will be a girl that loves you and will never hurt you....good things comet o those who wait

SadisticDolly
04:18 Sep 05 2010

Very nice...and well I will be straight here...that story is almost...something I have gone through..as well as you. that almost made me cry....I liked it.

JustinV
21:46 Oct 13 2010

You have a real gift for imagery.