Sara is a beutiful, inteligent, red head with a big secret. " I don't know about this Tom?" Sara says to Tom Hawkins her long time friend and biggest crush.
"Sara where have i ever streed you wrong?" tom says laughingly.
Sara stares at the coffen in fear of what may be inside. she ponders why Tom wanted to show her a dead man's body but she is unfortunatlly trusts him. Tom opens the coffen and all of a sudden sara screams. they both try to run out of the way of the corpse. the crasy monster grabs sara and bites her neck. she screams " NO! TOM HELP ME!!"
but Tom has already left. sara feels weak everything is going black. She takes her last breath and dies in the strangers arms......................... TO BE CONTINUED
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ViktorianaBlue
17:34 Apr 24 2012
Ok - I'm hooked........ keep going!!