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soon to be published :)

15:23 Feb 13 2016
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i hope you all enjoy Vampire Secrets :

how ever i have spoken with a local publisher and soon i will publish the book for everyone to read :)

for now i will stop posting pieces of my book until it is completely finished.



for everyone who has read the parts i have posted :

please give me some feedback . let me know what you like about it and what could be changed :)

and ofc what you like to see.

do you think it has potential?



special thanks to all who have read my story so far :)



let me know , Greetz Alexis.


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Vampire Secrets : Chapter 1.7 Lost

14:46 Feb 13 2016
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hey sup Brody ?

Amara this is Korey my brother.

and these guys are Glenn , Domenic and Kribas.

hey i am Amara nice to meet you.

nice to meet you to beautiful mysterious lady.



Amara was flattered by the words spoken by Dominic.



so we are hunting today?

not exactly Kribas , we are tracking someone.

Amara's friend ran out into the woods in the middle of the night.he claimed to have seen a moving light and ran after it.

is he out of his mind? this forest is full of danger! Brody you know just as well as i do Brad might be already dead IF we can find him at all.

yes i know Dominic but we have to try, we can leave that boy to his fate.

alright then.

Amara why don't you wait inside ? no please i wanna help!

you can't right now.

the woods are far to dangerous at this point.

just trust me alright? we will find your friend.



Amara went inside as requested but she could not wait around.

her uncle was not yet back and so Amara went to her uncles room.

she took the hunting rifle that was hanging on the wall.

she had used it before , her uncle thought her how to shoot it back when she lived here in Marble Falls.

she took the ammo and went to the garden just when she wanted to go into the forest a voice called her.

it was her uncle.



AMARA!?!

you are not going into the woods am i clear!?

uncle i can't just wait around Brad is my friend.

i know he's your friend but you cannot go into those woods.

you don't understand the dangers that lurk there.

uncle please!

no the fact that i learned you how to shoot a rifle doesn't mean your a hunter!

go back inside!

yes uncle.



Amara felt upset.

who was this guy anyways?

her uncle had changed so much she barely recognized him.

she put up some music of the mp3 player she had lying around here from her last visit.

she was listening to 1 hour of dark music by Peter Gundry he is one of her favorite composers.

suddenly the door flew open with a bang.

Amara was terrified as she heard a noise coming out of the hallway.

she went into a deep trance.



where am i ?



Amara looked around , she was no longer in her bedroom.

it was so dark she could barely see a thing.



Hello ?

can anybody hear me !?!?!



it was cold but then she saw a light.

for a moment there Amara thought it as trying to talk to her.

the light circled around her it was trying to tell her to follow.



finally the place she was lit up.

candles caught flame out of nowhere.

where was she? what was this place.

it looked like she was in some sort of tunnels.



she followed the little light even though she didn't want to, for Brad had seen one to but he was now missing.

the light brought her to some sort of room.

there were coffins!

she realized she did know where she was.

only she never went in before.

she was in the crypts!

but how did she end up in the crypts.

she had no memory at all of walking into the crypt or even going near the thing today.

the light brought her deeper into the tunnels and then she heard a voice whispering.



do not fear the dark , for now it is your greatest ally.

do not fear the dark , for darkness will be your saviour.

do not fear the dark , we will protect you.



Amara noticed she had heard that voice before.

earlier yesterday when she arrived at the house and she was standing in front of the crypt.

what was going on?

finally after 2 hours of walking the light stopped.

then it turned right, she was outside standing only a few meters away from a beautiful lake.

she looked around, it was amazing.

the sunlight reflecting on the water, she green gras , the flower beds near the lake.

across the lake she saw a big mansion.

she could not see a road nor a way to get around the lake for it was to big to walk around.

there was a small boat on her right.

she pushed it into the water and and decided it was stable enough to use to get across the lake.

the light disappeared.



finally across the lake she went up the steps leading to the back of the big mansion she had seen in the distance.

she walked around to the front of the house suddenly someone stoof before her.

it was a man with blond hair and a very pale skin and deep blue eyes.

he must not have been older then 19 years old.

he was very attractive.



you must be Amara , i am Sebastian Iverson.



Amara noticed he did not come out of the shadows.



how do you know my name?

come inside , i'll explain everything.



Amara follows Sebastian into the house.

it was cold and dark.

it was very comfortable and she felt at home.

she had no idea why.

Amara?!?!?!

Brad? are you okay ? we have been looking everywhere for you !

yeah i am fine.

Amara , Brad why won't you come with me and we will have a little chat.



they went upstairs and Amara was just amazed by the gothic looking interieur.

the hallway leading to Sebastians office was also very dark and mysterieus.



alright have a seat.

the Blackbourne family, do you know any of it's history Amara?

not really , only that there were a lot of deaths caused by an unknown decease and that a lot of people went missing,

kind of funny since now Brad disappeared and my mom ...

yes your Friend has told me about your mothers death , i offer you my sincere condolences.

thank you.

perhaps this is not the time for this conversation.



how about i just take you back to your uncles house ?

yeah alright let's go.

sad by the fact Amara had to leave they walk to a limousine with dark windows, it seemed there were curtains from the inside and they were closed.

the Driver was looking strange at Amara and she got in the Limousine.

Brad ?!?! c'mon , sorry Amara i can't leave just yet.

why ?

i will explain later okay ?

no what is going on ?!?!



Sebastian went into the limousine and closed the door and they drove of back to Amara's uncle.

when they arrive Uncle Derek and Brody are fighting.


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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.6 suspicion.

03:58 Feb 13 2016
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Brad ran after the light he claimed to have seen,

Amara being scared for what could happen followed him and tried to keep up but Brad was just to fast for her.

eventually she lost track of him as he ran into the darkness of the woods.



Amara!? Amara where are you?

i am here uncle Derek!

get back into the house immediately !

no i can't Brad is ..

BRAD IS WHAT!?!?

you kids didn't i tell you to stay away from the crypts !

but uncle Derek we weren't anywhere near the crypts,

Brad saw a light and then he started running after it and i went after him to stop him but he ran to fast for me to keep up.

Amara i want you to go back into your room now.

i will take care of this.

but uncle .. NOW AMARA!



Amara is waiting for Brad to return , it would help if at least her uncle could give her some news.

it seems he knows more then he says or wants me to know , but Brad's life is at stake.

perhaps she should ask for help herself from others.

back when she lived here in Marble Falls she had a friend named Brody. he was a bit of a strange person but he was always nice.

maybe she can ask him for help.



10 am in the morning and still no word on Brad nor did Amara know what her uncle was really doing.

was he actually looking for Brad?

she decided to take a risk and went to Brody.



(knock knock)

who's there?

hi it's Amara Blackbourne.

i don't know if you remember me but i used to live here in the street with my Parents we owned the Big House over there.

ah yes i remember you.

you were that happy family that were always very kind to me and my family.

so what can i help you with Amara?

well i hate to ask for help now.

hey it's no problem, why don't you come in and tell me what happend?



Amara explained yet again the whole story, Brody noticed the tears in Amara's eyes and gave her a tissue.



thank you.

hey it's okay if all of that happend to me i would have been crying to.

but so from what i understand you friend is missing, ran into the woods at night after some light he saw?

yeah that's right.

i hope he's okay it was so dark and everything went by so fast.

hey it's okay , your going to be just fine and so will your friend.



i am a hunter that means i am good at tracking and my friends and my brother are also very good at hunting and tracking.

give me a minute to call everyone in and we will help you find your friend okay?

omg thank you so much.



and they give each other a hug.



so i'll be right back.

okay.



Brody walks out of the room into the kitchen.

she can hear him calling his friends.

she looks around.

wouw he really loves hunting.

and what is all this weird stuff it looks like witchy stuff , she thinks to herself.

15 minutes later Brody comes back into the room.



they are on there way here now.

i need to ask you something though.

did you see the light yourself?

or have you heard anything strange around the house?



hmm does he know something that she doesn't know?



no nothing , it's just really weird i mean i'm wondering what he saw and why he ran after it.

yeah it's strange but uhm let's go to your uncles house okay?my friends will meet us there.

okay.



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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.5 ever growing fear of the unknown

02:37 Feb 13 2016
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in the car driving to her uncles house Amara starts to wonder why he didn't like to see them back at the airport.

Amara and her uncle Derek were once close as a brother and sister until Amara's mother got a job in London and they had to move there.

Derek was only 28 years old and his Brother Amara's father Carson 38 years old 10 years of difference but Carson had always been there for his little brother.

everything became harder and the brothers became more distant. the move to England was hard for them both to accept but Adriana Amara's mother needed the job for Carson was unemployed for the time being.



finally arriving at Derek's house Amara noticed the garden that was once a beautiful place had fallen grim.

she remembered a beautiful colorful garden full of the most beautiful flowers and a nice pond with a small river leading into the woods of Marble Falls.

now the beautiful pond had dried up , the trees in the garden where dead and the family crypt looked more terrifying then it ever did before...



a cold breeze ran through Amara's hair, and she felt like she was being watched.

she heard a sound coming from the Crypts.

like something wanted to draw her in.

something was calling out for her.

not noticing that she was actually now standing right in front of the crypts gate Brad saw that Amara was acting strange so he called out for her but she did not gave a response.



Amara what are you doing ?

AMARA! STEP AWAY FROM THAT GATE NOW!

uncle Derek , i could have swore i heard something wait how did i get here i was standing over there at the porch!?!?!

it doesn't matter just stay away from the crypts okay?

yeah ..sure uncle Derek.



what were you doing here Amara?

i don't know Brad i don't even know how i got here in the first place.



(silent whispers : he's coming, be ware he is nearer then you think. danger surrounds you everywhere and to survive you might have to die to live forever)



what the hell was that !?!?!?!

i don't know brad but it scares the crap out of me!

i think it came from the crypts , we should check it out later!

no , Uncle Derek told us not to go near that place.

hmm don't you wanna know what's in there.

honestly no i don't brrr cold.

let's go inside then but this conversation is not yet over...

fine Brad.



the sun went down and the night began.

they had not seen Derek all day since he warned Amara to stay away from the crypts.

what was going on with him why was he acting so strange.

did Amara do something wrong or did he dislike Brad?



Amara we should really check the crypts out tonight while your uncle's asleep.

are you kidding me ? , i don't wanna go anywhere near that place.it scares the crap out of me.

yeah i know but c'mon don't you wanna know what those whispers where all about? or why your uncle doesn't want us there , OR WHY YOU SUDDENLY GOT BRAINWASHED INTO GOING THERE!?!?!

well y but not while it's dark.

over my dead body.

funny you say that Amara with those whispers coming out of the crypt .

you know soon when we go home my mom will be buried in the same crypt.

i just ...i miss her Brad i miss her so much.



Amara starts to cry again , and eventually she cries herself asleep.

a few hours later she wakes up all lights are out and Brad is deep asleep and snorring very loud..

she looked through the room and saw her bed and Brad's there was a 3rd bed in the room and it looked like someone was lying in it.

Amara gets out of bed and slowly approaches the 3rd bed in the room.

she looks at the face of the person lying on the bed.

when she looks closer it looks like the face is rotten and suddenly they eyes opened Amara jump scared screamed and then she was sitting up in her bed Brad beside her trying to calm her down.



nightmare?

yeah i think so but it felt so real , the cold the wood under my feet , the persons face ...

what person Amara.

the was a guy or a girl lying in that bed over there , and when i went close and looked who it was it's face was rotten and the smell was so bad.

ok calm down i'm sure it was just a nightmare.

well i'm not it felt so real i know there is more behind it brad , i can feel it.

i'll ask my uncle when he wakes up about this.

i have a feeling he might know more.



not being able to sleep Brad and Amara went downstairs.

it was only 6 am in the morning.

it was still dark outside.



hey did you see that?

see what Brad?

that light it was just here it was moving it went towards the front door!

c'mon !

if this is a joke i will kill you ,I've had enough creepy experience for one night!



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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.4 the threat

00:24 Feb 13 2016
Times Read: 291


Brad ? yes Amara?

i think we are being followed by that weird guy we saw earlier.

well or flight leaves in only 5 minutes now we need to get aboard the ship , he will probably not follow us there.

and if he does ?

what is he gonna do kill us in the airplane ? i think not Amara.

i wish Sam was here with us to cheer us up :(

we can Skype with her once we get to your uncle alright?

yes i know that but still.

c'mon we need to board the plane.

WAIT , shit the doors are closing!

WAIT !!!

phew we almost didn't make it there..

YES! that creep didn't make it , i told you Amara were fine.

now let's find our seats shall we.



even though Amara knew that the guy didn't make it to board the plane.

she had a bad feeling that they would see him again ...

after a while she fell asleep.



Brad was just watching video's on the apparently dark side of Youtube as he called it.

2 hours later he got an email with a recording in it.

he opened it up and hear a strange man talking.



i know where your going , i know who you are and i know all adresses of your loved ones.

if you don't return Amara to me within the next 2 days i will start killing them off one by one , starting with your friends in high school.



Amara wake up!

what is it Brad?

we are almost landing in Houston , your uncle lives in Marble Falls right ?

yeah it's a great place but you know me i probably would say that about everything in America.

yeah lol your like obsessed with it.

yeah i know but it's awesome and it has Hot topic and i don't know so many cool stores i wanna go to.

fine just don't drag me everywhere okay ?

fine Brad.



can i have your attention please.

for a safe landing please fasten your seat belts.

we are now arriving at Houston airport.

i hope you all had a wonderful experience and have a nice day.



hmm right wonderful experience? how are we supposed to have a wonderful experience in a plain Brad?

i don't know Amara they are just idiots...

lol could you be more rude Brad?

don't try me XP



Attention please ,

the airplane has now landed please watch your step and don't push the line on your way out.

we hope to see you again.



once Amara and Bradley got off the plane they go to the main entrance as her father requested.

they see her uncle and he doesn't look so happy to see them.











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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.3 Family rescue.

04:52 Feb 11 2016
Times Read: 311


miss Adams ? could i use your phone?

sure Amara.



Hello ?

dad it's me Amara hey sweety do you have a new phone?

no dad i borrowed this from miss Adams.

miss Adams ? Erica's mother?

yes father, why are you at Erica's ?

well i'm not well not anymore we are underway to the Police office.

wait what? did you do something bad?

no , dad there's something i have to tell you.

what's going on over there?

it's about mom , she's dead?

oh no how did that happen ?!?!



Amara explains everything to her dad.

both Amara and her Father were now crying.



sweetheart if your making a joke about this please tell me now.

i'm sorry dad i wish i was.

i am coming home now!

dad please be careful i am scared i don't wanna lose you to.

you won't i promise.

i love you dad , i love you to now please be careful.

i will arrange for you to stay over at your uncle's house until i am back okay ?

okay then can Brad come to?

yes your both exposed now , okay dad.

alright i will see you soon okay sweetheart?

yes dad.



20 minutes later they arrive at the Police office.

alright you two wait here i will ask detective Sheppard to

make sure you will be okay.

i'll be right back.

alright.



so how are we going to get our stuff ? i mean we still need some stuff who knows how long we will be gone?

yeah your right , maybe the detective can come with us?



hey kids how are you doing today? I've heard there have been some problems?



Amara takes a deep breath in and out as she yet again explains what happend.



all officers to the Blackbourne estate , we have a homicide Amara Blackbourne is with me,

no need to look for her.

don't worry child we will find the person or persons responsible for this.

Detective sheppard come in please.

what is it officer Mordeur ?

this just became a dubble homicide sir , we found a second body of a woman who looks to be a maid.

alright officer keep looking let me know when forensics get there.

will do sir. Mordeur out.

so from what you have told me your Uncle will be taking you both in Amara?

yes sir.

we cannot risk going back to the Crime scene i will put you both on a plane.

i guess we will have to buy some new stuff then Amara. yeah i guess so to Brad.

i'm glad i got my purse and laptop before we left my place.



at the airport they noticed a man staring at them.

when Brad and Amara both looked the man quickly turned away and walked in the other direction.



well i just contacted your uncle Amara he transferred the money to my bankaccount and i bought you the tickets.

so here they are .

when you land in London go to the main entrance , your uncle will be waiting for you there alright?

yes sir and thanks for the help.

no problem kids , just try to stay out of trouble alright.

yes sir.



so where do we have to go now Brad?

well our tickets says terminal 2.

hmm okay,



can i have your attention please.

the Flight to London is leaving in 43 minutes.

all please aboard the plane and fasten your belts.

the airplane to London is leaving from Terminal 2.



oh i guess you were right Brad.

you don't need to tell me that XP i always know.

sorry to fast to make jokes?

sorry stupid question ahum anyways.

let's go.



on way to the terminal the see the same guy before acting suspiciously and he seems to be following them.

could this be the same guy that killed Amara's mother?

and the same guy at Brad's place?


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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.2 help in dark times.

04:05 Feb 11 2016
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after sitting at the beach for 3 hours Amara decides it's time to leave.

she decided to go to Brad for help.



(knock knock)

who's there? it's me Amara, sorry to bother you i realized that it's 3 am but i am scared and i just don't know what to do"

aw Amara you look like a mess and your'e in pyjama's ?!?

come in i'll get you a cup of hot choco.

thanks Brad.

so what exactly are you doing here in the middle of the night and have you been crying?



after she explained everything to Brad she just could not keep it dry and hold herself together.



Amara we need to go to the police !

i kow Brad but i'm scared what if the guy finds me ? what if he was after me ?!?

what if he wanted me ... what if he....



out of the stress Amara fainted



Amara ? wake up AMARA!

hmmm 5 more minutes mother....

AMARA i'm not your mom you need to wake up !

i think you were followed here!

Brad what the hell are you talking about ..oh no it wasn't a dream was it ?

no i'm afraid not we need to leave now , if this is the same person that killed your mom then we need to get the hell outta here!



as she finally realized what happend Amara got up and the went downstairs into the living room.

there heard a strange noise coming from the backyard and saw that someone was trying to open the door.

they quickly opened the widow in the living room and went through and closed it again.



after a few minutes a shadowy figure apeared in the living room.

since the lights are all out they could not see his face or hair colour.



Amara this way!

shht don't make any noise.



the went into the direction of the yard where a hole in the fence made a perfect escape into a dark ally behind Brad's house.

they still had to be careful not to make any noise and but they finally got out of the ally.



c'mon we need to get to Sam's house she'll know what to do.

no we can't risk it Brad you saw what happend here he knew your location maybe he followed me and maybe he just knows my background.

well we cannot stay here.

so if we aren't going to Sam's house then where are we supposed to go?

i know it is a long shot but what if we go to Erica's?

are you insane Erica hate's us !

well yeah that's the point Brad he won't come looking for us there. well at least i hope not.

FINE but don't expect me to be friends with her.

Brad? do you really think i would ask that of you ? , i know the reason you hate her , i know the background between you two so don't worry.

let's go through ally's though so the guy can't find us.

sure Brad you know the way right ?

yep , okay then.



when they arrived at Erica's her mom was sitting at the front porch.



hello miss Adams.

Brad what are you doing at this hour? and who is this beautiful young lady?

i am Amara miss , can we come inside?

it's not safe out here and we really need a place to stay.

and we can't go back to either of our homes.

alright but you can only stay until morning.

yes m'am



so why don't you explain me why your both in pyjama's?



Amara turns completely pale as she thinks back about what happend to her mother and she looks at Brad for help.



can you tell her Brad ? i just can't right now.

yeah sure.

after miss Adams fully informed of their situation she prepares some food for Brad and Amara.

and walks upstairs to gather some clothes they can use.

after they ate.

so here is some clothing you can wear tomorrow but first you need to go to sleep.

here are some sleeping bags.

it's not super comfortable but it's better then nothing.



thank you so much for the help miss.

it's okay sweet girl, in the morning i will drive you both to the Police office.

now both of you sleep you only have about 2 hours but it is better then no sleep at all.



c'mon wake up you two. here are some towels and shampoo and body wash.

now go upstairs to the left is the bathroom.

thanks again miss.



did you get any sleep Amara?

yes but not much , i pretty much silently cried myself asleep.

alright well you go shower first.

okay.



she walks upstairs and bumbs into Erica.



WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?!

MOTHER?!?

yes what's wrong darling?

WHY IS AMARA HERE?

calm down Erica, Amara has been having a hard time and she and Brad stayed here for the night to rest.

WHAT BRAD'S HERE TO?!?!?!?

Amara sweet girl go get a shower i'll talk to my daughter.

ok.



as the warm water runs over her body she calms down a bit.

when she was done in the shower she dried her body with the towels brushed her hair and put on her clothes.

the mirror was foggy and she wiped the fog away with her hand.

now looking at herself in the mirror she noticed her eyes where red of all the crying.

she turned around and walked down stairs.



Brad you already showered?

yeah they have 3 bathrooms can you believe it?

oh okay.

alright Children are you ready to go?

yes miss.

alright c'mon get in the car.

Erica? be home for dinner okay.



yes Mother she said in a annoying bitchy tone.



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Vampire Secrets: Chapter 1.1 Death is only the beginning

22:42 Feb 10 2016
Times Read: 338


As Amara was playing her violin she caught the scent of Blood.

she put down her violin and went towards the blood scent,

as she came closer and the scent went sronger she hear a voice talking. she never heard this voice before she was sure of that.

it was a male voice dark and heavy.



"yes it is done my lord, is there anything else you would like me to do? yes i understand, i will see to it at once."



Amara quickly crawled behind the kitchen walls as the man went up the stairs that led to the Grand living room.

when she could no longer hear the man's footsteps she quickly but silently went through the entrance hall , that's when she saw the blood on the floor.

she could not yet see a body for she was certain the body was around the corner.



afraid she decided to look, when she saw the body of her mother she wanted to burst into tears, but she knew the man might hear it her mothers throat was slit.

she took her mothers ring and held her hand.

she put the ring in her pyama's pocket.



silently crying she ran to the end of the small hall she was in now and ran to the stairs that led down into the garage.

and she carefully and softly opend the door.

she silently closed the door behind her and went down the stairs.



she heard the strange man come down the upper stairs and going into the the grand hall above her and she wanted to attack him she wanted to make him pay for what he had done.but decided to hide.

after all she had no idea who he was or what he was capable of.



she quicly went into a dark corner and behind a few wooden plates leaning against the wall as the man now came into the garage and took 2 gasoline filled cans.



Amara heard him going back upstairs and she took her bike and opened the door of the garage leading to the front of the house.

she stepped on her bike and quickly went away as fast as she could.



she drove to the beach she didn't care just dropped down and crawled of her bike.

fully bursting into tears she looked into the water.

trying to figure out what she was going to tell her father how and where she was going to stay for the night.



her father was at a buisness trip to Japan.

so how was she going to reach him.

Amara was still in her Pyama's and had no idea where to go next.



Sam's maybe? or Brad's ?


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