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24 hours!!!!!

14:42 Jan 22 2010
Times Read: 536


Time: 24.00 hours!!!!

Finally made it a full day... and I am Level: 17.76



Pages Viewed Score (Pages: 4,219): 18 x .50 = 9.00

Time Spent Score (Time: 24.01 hours): 18 x .50 = 9.00

Base Score: 18



[ Bonuses / Penalties ]

Ratings (Ratings: 45): 18 x 0.0001 = 0.00

Database (Submissions: 0): 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Forum (Posts: 6): 18 x 0.0001 = 0.00

Profile (Rating: 9.292): 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Journal (Read By: 2): 18 x 0.0002 = 0.00

Friend (Lists On: 28): 18 x -0.0132 = -0.24

Blocked (Lists On: 0): 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Overblock (Blocks: 0): 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Society 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Mark 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Mentor 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Referral (Points: 0): 18 x 0.0000 = 0.00

Total Bonuses / Penalties: -0.24





Total Score: 17.76



[ Bonus / Penalty Percentages ]

Ratings (Ratings: 45): 0.01%

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Forum (Posts: 6): 0.01%

Profile (Rating: 9.292): 0.00%

Journal (Read By: 2): 0.02%

Friend (Lists On: 28): -1.32%

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-----*updated*

01-22-10 208 1 hour, 35 minutes, 4 seconds.

01-21-10 210 1 hour, 14 minutes, 48 seconds.

01-20-10 40 10 minutes, 10 seconds.

01-19-10 14 9 minutes, 34 seconds.

01-18-10 47 8 minutes, 1 second.

01-17-10 272 2 hours, 15 minutes, 2 seconds.

01-16-10 1014 5 hours, 46 minutes, 57 seconds.

01-15-10 567 3 hours, 32 minutes, 13 seconds.

01-14-10 391 2 hours, 48 minutes, 18 seconds.

01-13-10 978 4 hours, 40 minutes, 58 seconds.

01-12-10 481 2 hours, 33 minutes, 10 seconds.


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To The Gates of Hell Explation

03:35 Jan 14 2010
Times Read: 543


There are 4 parts. Like To Hell and Back, Each part can stand on it's own, but bring it together, and you get To The Gates of Hell

Part one: Into the Darkness

Part two: From Death to Dawn

Part three

Part four: Fire Starter

Full details coming soon


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Just out of reach

17:54 Jan 13 2010
Times Read: 547


I am so close to level 10, I can taste it... Just have to find the one thing that will push me over the edge, I just need that one last push.... so close... yet so far....


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To hell and back explation

20:58 Jan 12 2010
Times Read: 558


To Hell and Back was written in 6 parts...

And unlike Tribute to a deadman (written in 3 parts) I suffered from mega writers block after.

there are some text that is flipped upside down, if it doesn't show up, it is just a copy of the statement above it.

Part one: ɯıɹɹoɹ (mirror): You will notice that I compared Human to people, and in this poem I am trying to put you in a mind of a person that sees difference between everything yet nothing at all.



Part two: maze: Now before you think that this part should have been called ɯıɹɹoɹ (mirror) the effect of the upside down text in this part gives the effect of more confusion.



Part three: gears: This part is an idea of a mind shattering and crashing in on itself, and pushing someone over the limit



Part four: beyond the walls: A simple part, yet complex in itself, to show the reader the battle to regain control of the mind. And the outcome of what happened...



Part five: back to basics: The end results, the mental scars, that will never heal, the pain. The Build up of the whole poem. Being shocked back into our own mind, just to see the final result before we recover fully.



Part six: the last set: Now this part is hard to explain, I left it as a cliff hanger due to the fact that if I said what happened, it would ruin the whole build up... the whole poem... It is just the final note before the true question pops up... and in the end we are truly torn souls


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SexySanguinarian
SexySanguinarian
22:33 Jan 27 2010

Its good to see someone put so much effort into their writing! And it sure is worth it because it comes out great! :)





 

Level 3

20:17 Jan 12 2010
Times Read: 560


I know that making it to level 3 isn't that big of deal... but I just wanted to write about it, because, as soon as i hit level 3, i ended my writers block.


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TheSYSTEM
TheSYSTEM
12:44 Dec 07 2011

This is a cute entry. :P

Now, to make it to sire! ;D








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