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I've been running a story through my head over and over and I've typed some of it out. I know that I'll go back and change things as I go but some constructive criticism would be lovely.

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Part 1



The screams of the woman grew louder, more anguished as the beasts ruined her body and planted their seed deep within her so she could not take it out. All the while the tall figure in the corner of the dark room chuckled in pleasure. Basking in the pain of the defiled woman. I could feel my stomach churning but something—some strange feeling—kept my eyes trained on the scene, and wouldn’t let me wake up, because this had to be a dream. Nothing this horrible could be real. Watching, I could see the monsters clearly, their ragged faces looked starved and the woman was their long awaited feast. One of them had ice-blue eyes that, despite the horrid appearance of their owner, were themselves mesmerizing. But his companion on the other hand, had empty black eyes that made me feel as though I was spiraling into an abyss.

When they finally retreated from the woman’s body, my blood froze in my veins and the laughter of the tall figure in the corner grew. The human woman that lay upon the blood and semen soaked bed . . . was my mother.





Sarah awoke from her nightmare screaming bloody murder. Her long black hair matted to her neck with sweat, and her chest heaved as she breathed raggedly. The heavy footsteps that approached her bedroom door, matched the pounding of her heart as her door flew open to reveal a panicked, teenaged boy with the same black hair. Standing there panting and full of adrenaline that his pupils nearly engulfed his blue irises. With a whimper, Sarah reached for the boy and quickly, he crossed the room and joined her under the covers, pulling her smaller form to his chest and holding her there.

“Seth . . .” she whimpered his name as she buried her face in his shoulder. Her body trembled as she cried against his bare shoulder. Seth held her tightly, petting her hair, staying silent to let her ride out the fear as he always did.

Sarah and Seth, twins. Though not identical, the two shared a bond that rivaled that of identical twins. Sarah had long been suffering nightmares, none of which she was ever willing to share. But however close the were, Seth could never tell what his sister was thinking, nor had they ever shared a dream. No, instead the bond they shared was more primal. Whatever one of them was feeling, the other felt. It was this that had Seth panicked. The fear and shock that had filled Sarah, filled him as well. Even though he never dreamt and rarely slept, the sheer intensity of the emotion and the sound of her scream was enough to show him what it was to have a nightmare.

He held her until the sound of two more sets of footsteps reached the door. A shy knock sounded and Seth spoke.

“Door’s open.” His voice was strong, demanding of respect, which was inevitably given. The door opened to reveal a man and a woman, the same woman from Sarah’s dream. The sight of her disheveled mother made Sarah’s tears flow faster from her eyes. The pain Seth felt in his heart, both his own as well as hers, made him turn to their parents. “Get out. You’re only making it worse.”