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I'm You And You're Me 1/30/2017

03:20 Jan 31 2017
Times Read: 398


Let's see, where to start?

(We could shove a knife through your heart)

What is wrong with you?

(Really? Do you actually need need a clue?)



Okay? Why is that you hate me?

(I don't, I just enjoy causing you misery)

For once can't you just be nice?

(Only if i can run you through and

put you on ice)



You need to get out and see the world

(And what? Watch you act like a girl?)

Seriously, what is wrong with you?

(You really need more than a memo

or two?)



Were you born this way?

(I gotta be me, what can I say?)

Are you done?

(No, I'm just starting to have fun)



Your mouth needs to be sealed shut with glue

(Really? And how exactly would that help you?)

It would cut back on most of my misery

(Well, listening to you is pure agony)



Can't we find a way to get along?

(Let me think.. hmm.. Nah, you just don't belong)

What did I do to you that was so wrong?

Would like that answer in the form of

a letter or a song?)



You know, it's said that peace is free

(How can it be that you're apart of me?)

Can we at least agree to disagree?

(No, cause that would be to easy)



What will it take for you to be happy?

(Can I treat you like discarded debris?)

Wtf? What is wrong with you?

(That should be easy to see,

I'm you and you're me)


COMMENTS

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Magdalena
Magdalena
03:28 Jan 31 2017

It's like how I used to feel that my head and my heart were always at war with each other; like having a head full of doubt and pain and a heart full of hope and dreams.



I love your writing, but I love you even more.





 

Won't You Stay 1/29/2017

00:26 Jan 30 2017
Times Read: 410


A man slowly walking

down a hall

suddenly hears a call

and as a shadow moves

across the wall

his pace slows to a crawl



Having thoughts like:

What should I do?

not knowing what to do

he looks around hoping

to at least find a single clue



The sound he heard before

now escalates behind every door

not wanting to hear any more

he slowly kneels closer to the floor



As he starts to pray

for an end to this day

a voice says "Won't you stay?"

not knowing what to say

he turns to see in his dismay

without any time to react

a figure dressed in black



He knows he's seen this person before

at least 3 to 4 times or even more

with nothing left to say or do

he looks up & says: "Oh, hey Mom, it's you

failing to remember that even he said

that she was already dead


COMMENTS

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Magdalena
Magdalena
00:32 Jan 30 2017

This is perfectly written in more ways than one. ♥





 

Beautiful Angel 1/21/2017

21:23 Jan 21 2017
Times Read: 458


I can understand people having dreams

I've had quite a few

Okay, maybe one or two

But to fall in love with a beautiful angel

such as you

Is one dream I never knew

could come true



Your heart and soul

takes my breath away

You're perfect in every way

there's no truer words

that I could say to convey

that you truly are the best part

of my day



While I'm thinking of you

I can't help but smile

you mean the world to me

I never thought that

I could be this happy



Your personality makes

me feel warm inside

and your soul never lets me

feel denied

With you I never feel as if

I have to compete

cause you truly make me

feel complete



I look forward to seeing you

everyday

and being by your side

in every way

whether it be

night or day

I love you

I truly do

I hope you know that

will always remain true


COMMENTS

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Magdalena
Magdalena
21:29 Jan 21 2017

You almost just made me cry; I fucking love you, and I'm not going to let you let me go. Only you have ever made me this happy.



...And you're still the best. :P





Dakotah
Dakotah
21:41 Jan 21 2017

That was beautiful. I am happy for you two. :)





BeautifulEnlightenment
BeautifulEnlightenment
21:22 Jan 23 2017

OMG AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I think I'm gonna cry for you girl!!!! That is SO sweet!!! I am SO HAPPY about you two!!! YAY!!! ^_^





 

Two Mice.. (5/30/10)

06:55 Jan 20 2017
Times Read: 477


Two blind mice awoke

in the middle of the night

giving each other a

quick and sudden fright.

Not knowing what to do

they stared at each other,

rolled up their sleeves

and munched on a

single slice of cheese.

They munched for what

seemed like days

until the cheese was

all but moldy and gray

and in one single sneeze

they realized they had fleas.

So from the cheese they went

thinking these fleas were

truly heaven sent,

they munched on their fleas

and probably excepted

their very own disease.

they washed their meal down

with some bleach and wine

as they set up the poison sign.

as they looked up through the

hole in their ceiling to see the sky,

the two of them sat and cringed

due to light sensitive eyes..


COMMENTS

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Magdalena
Magdalena
17:52 Jan 20 2017

I love how creative your writing is. :)





 

Think About You 7/11/2016

22:08 Jan 18 2017
Times Read: 516


You're a kind hearted soul

(Nah, just a worthless bitch)

You make me whole

(I'd rather see pain cause you to twitch)

You're a sight to behold

(I'd rather be bind)

You speak to my inner soul

(Well, time to erase my mind)



You're like an angel from above

(Someone, please give me a gun)

You're my one true love

(Yea, we're done)

I want to spend my life with you

(Now I'm just asking for pure misery)

My love for you is true

(I need more Jack and Pepsi



I think about you all the time

(Why are you still here?)

I'd help at the drop of a dime

(It's not like you're the one I'd hear)

You make me feel warm inside

(I wish I could burn you alive)

Being with you is one hell of a ride

(With your level of stupidity,

how'd manage to survive?)



I can't wait 'til I see you again

(Why won't you go away?)

You truely are my best friend

(You're are the worst part of my day

in every way)

Without you, I'd only feel misery

(Yea, that's a bald face lie)

You're the only one I want to see

(Please, just die)


COMMENTS

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Magdalena
Magdalena
22:14 Jan 18 2017

LOL damn, you need the gerbils to kill someone for you? ;)





QueenZombiee
QueenZombiee
22:15 Jan 18 2017

Haha I love it!





Anaksha
Anaksha
22:29 Jan 18 2017

LMFAO Silly gerbils ^_^








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