If I died tomorrow
would you even care..?
would you fell any sorrow..?
or would you think
that life was fair..?
Did you mean any of the things
that you once said..?
or did you just say those words
to put a sense of false hope
in my head..?
Do you secretly laugh
when you know I'm around..?
is that why you never make
a single sound..?
Honestly I don't know what
to think anymore
but one things for sure
you had no problem
showing me the front door
I guess when it comes down to it
I should of known it all along
that everything about me
is totally wrong
I can't seems to do anything right
I can't even stand my own sight
you had every right to walk away
hell.. if I was you.. I wouldn't stay
just out of curiosity
if I died tomorrow
would you even care..?
would you feel any misery..?
would you fell any sorrow..?
or would you sit back
have a drink and think
that life is finally fair..?
COMMENTS
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vampyrebeauty
11:00 May 08 2010
Nice writing. Kind of sad but that how life is sometimes...
PAGAN
18:24 Jul 29 2010
yep, kinda sad but we will all be there at some point. great poem i know just how that feels :)
xxNemesisxx
00:12 Aug 18 2010
nice
vates
06:58 Sep 16 2010
I LOVE ur poem, so powerful and meaningful. I get that way sometimes.
Reposing
00:33 Oct 28 2010
i like this one...
LuvlySwan86
07:59 Aug 31 2016
Allow me to be the first to say -screw whoever made you feel like that at the time.
You seem to be a very emotionally driven person. Me too.
But you know, that's what makes us special.
Never forget that.