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I really liked the profile name "Crimson Echo", so I managed a poem of it. Here's to another smash hit. (Hopefully)



Sticks and stones

will break tha bones,

but words will

never hurt me

for sound asleep

the dreams we keep

often speak of

the things we seep,

and show your voice

as a Crimson Echo,

give you no choice,

you will reap

what you sew,



Stick and stones

will break my bones,

and words can

only hurt me if

they're a Crimson Echo.

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CrimsonEcho
09:50 Sep 30 2010

well of coarse i like it cos bam hahah its me..and not just my name but me...dreaming of what i cant have longing to finc a voice..but my blood into what i do and the outcome is wat deserve :)

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vampchica4
23:13 Sep 30 2010

Maybe a little too much rhyming? but i never had a taste for rhyming, lol

I like the contradiction though... very powerful.

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As I expose

the truth of it all

it seems to me that

you pretended not to recall



What I expose

will be your downfall

everyone I see

seems to agree

with the truth I saw



Your bones witll break

and shatter your

feelings of late

Nights down underground.



All I expose

the truth of it all,

You will be heading

for unclimable walls,

a stone like heart

will tear you apart,

but kindness will

cause you more pain.



As I expose

the truth of it all,

What I expse

will tear you apart.

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vampchica4
23:14 Sep 30 2010

I can relate to this one... very serene, but it has a sweetly dark twist.

Love it!

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My minds so full

of broken dreams

that my life is

ripping at the seams,

all of reality is

a light's gleam,

off in the distance,

or so it seems.



As we float off

to the open sea,

the many tribes

from the beach flee,

having only been

still by fear, and

thankful were we,

for they were many

more than we.