Authors Comments: I'm not finished the story yet. ill get the other part done
Creative
Story Rating PG 13
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Hello my name is Amber Black, and this is my story.
“Tonight, is the night. Yes, tonight is the night I should go to the club.” I said to myself.
So, I got ready for the club, when I had on my black party dress and my black knee-high boots, and my long red hair left down, and now I’m ready to jump in to my black Mercedes. Until, I realized I forgot my key, so I had to back inside to get them. Dam me to forget the important stuff.
“OK,” I said to myself, “now I’m ready to go.”
I arrive at the best club called “The Neon Lily.” I’ve gone to “The Neon Lily” since I was 19 and now I’m 23, you do the math. Anyways, the bouncer, Joe lets me in with no problem. So I walked in the door, and went to the bar, where Ted is working as a bartender. I ordered my drink, it was $7.00, but I get a discount for being the best customer. This is a good thing if you don't have much money, like me. So, after Ted mixed up my drink he gave it to me, and I thanked him. I sat there and talked to Ted, when he wasn’t busy. Then he had to tend to another customer.
Anyway, I’m sitting there at the bar, and Ted gives me another drink and he says, “That man down there is paying for all of your drinks and he wants me to give this to you to, Amber.”
When Ted is told me this, he was pointing down at the other end of the bar.
“Thanks Teddy. And can you tell him, “thank you for being so kind.” I said looking down at the bar.
“Will do, Amber.” Said Ted. So he walked down at the other end of the bar. I watched Ted walk to the guy, who is paying for my drinks, and Ted talked to him, then the guy smiled at me!! Wow! He had a great smile! He is very skinny, with long black hair, and a great smile.
I got up and walked towards the good looking man, with his bought drink in hand. When he saw me coming towards him he smiled, and once again I melted. I couldn’t help melting; he was so drop dead gorgeous.
You know how that little voice in your head says that you should stay away? Well I had the voice tell me not to go over there, but I don’t know why. I didn’t listen to the little voice.
So, I walked towards him, putting on my best smile, to try to impress him.
“Hello, my name is Amber.” I said nicely to him, “and thank-you for paying for my drinks.”
“Hello Amber. My name is Edward. And you’re welcome, you can have any drink, its all on me.” Edward replied. “Would you care to sit by me? I don’t think I bite,” he said with a laugh.
“I hope not hard.” I said jokingly while I sat beside him.
We talked for a couple of hours and then he said, “Would you like to dance, Amber?”
“Why not, it wouldn’t hurt anything.” I said laughing. By now I've had about 5 drinks. And I think I'm a little bit of drink, I mean drunk.
So, we are dancing to a slow song, I looked into his eyes and said, “Those are the most beautiful blue eyes I’ve ever seen."
“So are yours, Amber. Your eyes remind me of the bluest skis.” He said.
I nodded nodded and then said, “Edward, where are you from?”
“Born and raised here in England.” he replied.
“I was too!” I said surprised, “There is so much we have in common.” I said, trying not to fall down, and then I'd be embarrassed. Falling in fount a cute hottie.
“Yea, it seams that way. Would you like to go to my house, or go get a cup of coffee?” he asked me.
“Yea, sure Edward,” I said surprised, “you can pick where we go.”
“OK then, question Amber.”
“Yea sure Edward.”
“Did you walk or drive?” I walked here, its a lovely night.” he said.
“I drove,” I said proudly
“I have to drive you to my house, because you're to drunk to drive. Come on let's go find your car, Amber,”
“Oh thanks, Edward.”
“Your welcome my dearest Amber.” Edward said smiling, “ummmmmm........ dear, what color is your car?”
“Its a black Mercedes.” I said proudly.
“Good choice of car. Edward said smiling.
I nodded. So my newly found boyfriend and I searched for my car. So, about five minuets later we found it. I handed Edward my keys. We got into the car, then we headed to wherever he wanted to go.
I must of fallen asleep. All I remember is car lot and some lights after we left “The Neon Lily.” We arrived at a big black gate with a letter on it, it had the letter “S” in a big bold letter. The gates opened. He drove the car onto a driveway that led up to a 20th century Gothic style castle.
“It's amazing,” I gasped.
“Welcome to Skylar's castle.” Edward said.
“Wow!” I gasped
We parked out side the door. He gets out of the driver door, comes around to the passenger side door, and opens it for me, and helps me out of the car.
“Thanks.” I responded. I thought to myself, “Well, this guy is so nice! Where have you been all my life?”
Edward nodded. He walked me up to the doorway, and the door opened magically. A man is standing behind the door, holding the door handle.
“Evening, James,” Edward said.
“Good evening, Edward sir. Hello dear.” James said to me, “I'm James, the butler.”
“Hello James. My name is Amber Black.” I replied to James. As soon as I said that, he shut the door behind us.
“Yes Edward.” I said.
He showed me every room in the house. We entered into his bed room, I walked over to his bed and sat on the edge of the bed. He followed me, and then sat beside me. After awhile he leaned over and kissed me on the lips, and then made a trail to my neck, still kissing, after a little while he started nibbling softly on my neck. He started to nibble harder and harder, then he did the unexpected, he sank his teeth into my neck.
“Ow!” I said surprised.
“Sorry, I shouldn't of done that.” he said.
“No, No Edward it just got me by surprise.” I said.
“I'll stop if you want me too.” he said.
“Oh, no,” I said, “that feels good, keep on doing that.” I said not trying to laugh.
“Why are you laughing?” He asked.
“That sounded so wrong.” I answered.
“Yea, it did sound a little wrong.” he replied.
“Thats OK Amber.” Edward said while smiling. Then he leaned over and started to kissing my lips and then worked his way to my neck again, and bit me again, sinking his teeth deeper and deeper in to my neck. It hurt for a little bit and then the pain went away.
Five minutes later......
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COMMENTS
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wayne
07:06 Aug 04 2009
you are an awsme writer you had me entraned as i read
hatthemad
17:17 Aug 04 2009
I can hardly wait to find out the rest of the story. I like it alot.
wayne
06:31 Aug 05 2009
awsome