God speaks first for he most all powerful and knowning says, "I have all the good ones" Who do you have Devil? the Devil laughs and replys, "I have all the wicked ones." back and forth they try to out do each other but, they forgot that a vampyre was there listening to them fight and he says, "I don`t care who has what I just came here to grab a drink and watch you to fight like to cats in heat." I have all the blood I will ever went and that fine by me. as he gets up and laughs as he leaves the bar. God turns and says, "He is not one of mine" and the devil says, "I would love to have him on my team but, I am afraid he try to off me and be top dog of hell. " And I can`t have that so he is damned to walk this earth as he is.
Nick walks back too his home and thinks of his new friend will I see or meet him again. He tells himself, "only time will tell." He grabs a cold one from the refrigerator and goes in his room gets out of his sweaty cloths and jumps into the bed and turns on the television with the remote and watchs a movie till he fall off to sleep. After 2 hours he starts to dream and see`s weird things he can`t explain. Then he see`s Kole in his dreams bitting him and crossing him over to becoming a vampyre and, he see`s him offer him of his own blood to drink. He was given the dark gift or did it really happen. When he had awoke it was mourning time and of course the brightness of the sun`s UV ray`s slowly started to bother him. But, then it never did before he thought this was a bit strange and payed it no mind. An then it started to hurt his eye`s so, he got up and went to get his sunglasses that was in the dresser next to his bed. He went in the bathroom and shut, and locked the door behide him. He turns on the water in the sunk and fills it up with cold water an, then turns it off and, dunks his face in it and, pulls his head out fast. He then looks into the mirror and look`s at his neck where Kole had bitten him in his dream but, there was no marks. Again he does not think of it and, jumps in the shower an gets clean. He gets out and dry`s himself off with the towel and then ties it around his waist and walks out an into his bedroom to get dressed. He grabs a quick bite to eat before he goes to hang with his friends at the local mall. As he is skating around inside the mall he hears these voices and he falls an lands on his arse. Of course his buddy`s burst out laughing at him then he gets up and tells them that he saw a pretty woman an that made him lose his balance. They all just stopped laughing and, went back to skating in the mall. He gets the notion to watch horror movies especially, vampires in general. He never was into that sort of thing but, he finds it relaxing to his mind, body and soul. He didn`t even get scared of watching them. He even his grown to the night by taking long midnight walks around his neighborhood. His three other roommates have noticed a slight change in him and, the way he acts. He has not seen his friend at all and, has some questions to ask him. So, he roams about online websites and try`s to learn and, find all that he can on vampyrism. He see`s alot of people nod towards him as they walk pass him on the street or where ever. But, hope`s that one day he will see and, meet his new friend and, ask those questions that needed answering. Nick goes on like that for 5 years straight an has not seen Kole. Until one day he did! Tune in next time and see what all is said on this?
COMMENTS
My my, that is quite the synairio!
I enjoy this story quite a bit.
Turning someone in their dreams is something we all have done, i must say.
Thats why it is so brilliant!
very good
Hmmm....quite interesting. I enjoyed it highly. :)
you have me on the edge of my seat
wow I got lost in it
could u not break it in sections!
How interesting...
That is how I was feeling at first about myself being different.
wow I love it
Thank you my lady am happy that you are enjoying it.
I'm somewhat of a grammar nazi but dont meant to be rude. I just suggest you put spaces in there and separate it into more paragraphs so its not all jumbled together.
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xxWiccanxPrincessxx
05:31 Jul 19 2009
VampyreGurl22
07:22 Aug 04 2009
Love it
NightRaven
06:18 Feb 19 2010
i so like this one hehehehe is so true hehehehehehehe
LadyBloodMoon
01:45 Mar 25 2010
Very Nice
JazmynKnight
01:46 Sep 17 2011
I can see that very thing playing out
TheFangtasticOne
03:24 May 16 2018
Great job nico