i got these published!!
Cat In The Hood
By Rose Nizami
My baby is,
My mother is,
My aunt is,
My cat
I am
Trasportation,
I'm a bed,
I'm a carrier,
I'm a hood
Black clothes
Riddled with white
Blue jacket
Dotted with gray
She loves me
She shares
Her hair
So, I share
My sandwich
Bread and all
We are a pair
Of heros
I, her sister
and she's
My cat
In the hood
And we left
It like that.
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Things Not Getting Done
By Rose Nizami
The grass grows around
Where the procrastinator
Fools with the brown dirt
Dosen't do a thing
This classification
Of a nowhere man
Waits till its winter
The cold months, icy with frost
To plant all his crops
Only things that grow
Are the hunger of his heart
And graying long hair
Description
have black glossy hair, that changes when kissed by the suns rays. brown on the tips, for my baseball cap, can't cover all of my hair. average womans hight with an extra inch for the shoes. eyes blacker than the hair that sits on my head. my hair is straight, and gets wavy as you follow the ends of its length. i have black lipsticked lips, that contrast with my pale bloodless face. and i wear sunglasses, that are my regular glasses, just tinted a red brown, as to not take away from my kissable black mouth.
COMMENTS
gr8 job well worded n wisely said
Yep thats a nice poem, not all poems have to rhyme soo yeaah ^_^ epioneess poem
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Freedom Of The Arts
I am a child of the night
For the moon shines so bright
Trapped in a grave of dirt
They say things that hurt
I am a child of the night
For the moon shines so bright
Art smashed across closed doors
Tears shed from eyes to floors
I am a child of the night
For the moon shines so bright
I know I'm one of the best
So why do they pick the boring rest
I am a child of the night
For the moon shines so bright
Blood, too graphic, than water
Its freedom so it shouldn't matter
I am a child of the night
And even though there is darkness around me
There is always a light so let it be
For the moon will always shine so bright
COMMENTS
Yep, that's pretty good, but when I tried to sing it ......... I'll just have to stick to reading'em LOL
good content
it has a lot of emotion..........
it also uses a womans voice that being mine, lol.
:)
I really like it
when u write u paint a picture
very deep.. Wish I could write poetry like that.
Keep up the awesome work.
toxic
great depth and meaning, well written
Nice I like it
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Chocolate Cravings
By Rose Nizami
Halloween is a day to dress up. Imagination takes over and ghouls look for a good fright. Parties are scattered, from house to house delivering cavities to the best of show monster.
I, woman, crave, lush, melty, chocolate and visit such places. On my monthly, blood drenched pants, dripping with no pad, having no barrier for a hidden topic, feeling the safe identity of myself. Woman. I am a woman, not covered in pig's blood, but rather the marks of a warrior. Blood, that of a wild cat.
Walking through a forest of costumes, I make my way to the wanted treats, leaving a snail trail of slimy, grotesque, fluid. The "man" sporting Nixon's face, notices and his body says that I had left elephant tracks. Seconds fly and so does the vomit and then soon after the whole crowd. The parties doomed and then it ended. Me by myself with the chocolate.
"HISSSS", a vampire grabs my neck; I am struck with relief. For all the other wanna be vampires would rather fang themselves than bite me. And then he said, "Ironic, about how we celebrate a witch's holiday, when most were killed because of P.M.S." Then my eyes share the sweetness of the candy with him. And now the party begins. Period.
COMMENTS
wow I love it!! ^_^ It makes me see the pride in womanhood. ^_^
very nice! not many women proudly display the "messy" sentiments in their writing. i truly enjoyed it.
(this is not a poem.) these poems, well most of them are going to be published, very soon, in my school's book called the magnet. if you steal any of my shit, i will sue! i will make your life a living hell, by sueing you millions! my uncle is a lawyer!
COMMENTS
Very Cool
I love your poem and it is so true.
I like this one :)
I didn't think I would like this, since you stretched it out so long...but I did. It was very lovely. I have seen that thing myself so often. Was not brave enough to make most smile and I love gay men better than the straight ones. Still, I always make the persecuted smile first! This is a great image to share and you did it wonderfully! Thank you!
NymzanSusauren
Jenna Karro
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The Power Of Poetry
See
There was this book
I had to have another look
The author had this sight
Vampire Kisses, oh I might
Love to chat with fans
Then try to make plans
To tickle my funny bone
No I’m not alone
These fans were so maturely, immature
That I showed them what poetry was for
A nerd put up her picture, big mistake
I guess it was a chance I had to take
To make such a word war
From such inane story gore
Poetry got my point across
Poetry is a win not loss
I wrote to User name “Your Ophelia Hyde”
The feelings I have wanted to snide
Your “O”
Is really slow
You look geeky
That’s just freaky
How can I stand
Such a strand
Of red hair
I wish you weren’t there
So eewwwww
So ewwwwww
Hello your “OrthoDaunt”
Never taunt
Me
(For you see I’m Battythecat
And that’s where its at!)
COMMENTS
Interesting poem
.. not your best?? Uh huh?? It's very good.
I dont know, I think it's pretty good
COMMENTS
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dismayisfrail
01:49 May 01 2010
O.O awesome!!! I'm happy for you! And these are freaking awesome too :)
Angelus
23:24 May 03 2010
effin awesome.
martin
23:46 May 16 2010
I like'em bolth :)