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Misty Morgue

03:52 Feb 22 2011
Times Read: 613


A misty morgue...black roses lying at her feet like corpses buried deep within the ground... a lover passed on... tears fall with disbelief, her holding his lifeless body in arms... sudden chill through her spine... a blured figure she watched as her loved spirit gathered the roses, suddenly red they have become and full of life... soft and sheer they felt... him saying I'll always be with you... sudden breeze with a cold kiss ended her goodbye's...



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The Broken Rose

03:44 Feb 22 2011
Times Read: 614


A single rose stands alone

In the battlefield of love

Seeking one ending stone

Or the everlasting dove

Searching, searching, she cannot hide

As that last closed door swings open



Running, running, but nowhere to go

She's enclosed in her lover's arms

The fight within seems to slow

Knocked back by his charm

Her heart starts racing, her knees grow weak

The kiss of never ending silence



The door slams shut

Her heart seems to break

The intensity of an infected cut

To take the last thing left to take

The single rose stands alone

In the battlefield of love



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Black and Blue, I Hate You

03:41 Feb 22 2011
Times Read: 616


I wrote this one about my abusive relationship...





You left me black and blue,

I hate you,

I want to kill you,

You say you love me,

But you leave me,

Left me black and blue.



My heart is broken,

You said you loved me,

But you left me,

Left me on the streets,

You want me dead,

But if you kill me,

I'll come haunt you,

Because you left me,

Black and blue.


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Invisible...

00:06 Feb 03 2011
Times Read: 650


I tried to be visible

both body and soul,

doing all in my power

to keep myself in control.

I laugh at your jokes

both funny and not,

I remember things you said

while others forgot.

Yet you still fail to notice

everything I do,

how much I really care

how in love I am with you.

While other girls are lying

on how they really feel,

I hold my head up high

This girl is for real.

Let me be the girl

that will make your heart sing,

I want to be your heart

not just a fling.

I always try to hide

what's really on my mind

as I listen to you talk

I put my feelings behind.

You say I'm just a "friend"

but I wish I could be more,

The pain is unbearable

I can't take it anymore.

Looks like it doesn't matter

what I say or what I do,

because no matter what happens

I'll always be invisible to you...


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darksurfer1969
darksurfer1969
07:11 Feb 18 2011

Wow a really good poem,I've felt that way for a girl once very long ago.I did everything In my power to make her notice me.But she always went for the heart-breakers In the end.And I would be there to pick her right back up again,because I couldn't turned her away.Her green eyes always melted me.No Ideal whatever happened to her,I lost touched with her about 10 yrs ago when she moved away.She's still my biggest heartbreak although and I still get tears In my eyes every once In a while over her.





martin
martin
21:03 Feb 28 2011

good poem





 

A Drop of Rain...

00:04 Feb 03 2011
Times Read: 651


I stood out under the darkening sky.



My palm stretched.



A drop of rain fell on it.



It glistened like a tear...



and reminded me of all those tears



you promised me I would never shed.



And I looked at the drop of rain,



and then could see it no more



as my eyes vied with the rain.



and



the rain



ceded victory to me.


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darksurfer1969
darksurfer1969
07:13 Feb 18 2011

Your poems are really good.Loved them a lot.





 

Crying...

23:58 Feb 02 2011
Times Read: 652


Never asking for anything more

Not from the internet not from the store

Yet alone at night while I lie in this bed

Thoughts of sadness play in my head



Wanting for nothing expensive or bought

Peace and happiness is the only things sought

Tired of crying late through the night

Not wanting to argue; not wanting to fight



Sitting at home for days without end

Wondering what happened to my closest friend

Crying for hours as time passes by

Thinking to myself, “why do I cry?”



Lost in a world full of worries and fears

Brings nothing but sadness, depression and tears

Crying to myself seems to ease some of the pain

Yet, what does it do? What does it gain?



Please take away the worry, the pain and the grief

Give me a chance to get some needed relief

To sleep through the night without all the crying

The burdens too heavy, I feel like I’m dying



Strength, love and courage try to keep me on track

These I rely on to keep the weight off my back

Pretending and smiling is all that I can do

Crying to myself because of my relationship with you







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darksurfer1969
darksurfer1969
07:14 Feb 18 2011

I can relate to that poem.It's very good.








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