as i look down this rode a see no one there i was a fraed i was going to die till u appered behinde me and took my hand and showed me the way now i am walking ou the rode of love with u by my side nothing could make me any happyer then what i have with u i place ur hand on my chest u here my heart going crazy u make so happy that i have to say i love uuuuu
as I sit in this preasone in my heart to scared to let any body in for i fear for the wores and now that i meat u i feel like i can live again sooo i open the cell door to my heart takeing off evey lock on that door and opening it for the first time in ages i never thought of u but now i can feel thats true i dnk y but i think i fell for u (fell for uuuuuu). i wake up evey day and i see ur sweet face i cant belive that i have u in my life owwwww i think i have fell for u ohhh i think i fell for you ohhh ya i think i fell for uuuuuuu
COMMENTS
nice, it is really cool.
Great job, very sweet:)
that's so sweet!!
Sinister that is very nice but i feel that is a mask for what u really feel dee down in your self
lovely poem
till the day u walked into my life i had nothing to do with love with a broken heart and soul u came in and healed them both u opened my eyes to show me what true love is like now i have u in my arms and my heart and even in my head i all ways thought love was a joke till the day u came in my life i am ur mannnn and ur my girllll i never thoght i would find some one like u but i have so i am ur mannnnn and ur my girlllll ur the only one for meeee i love this feeling
i love u
COMMENTS
Awww, that is sweet, who is it about?
I really love your poems. They're so emotional
and honest.
OMG!!! your really good!!!
lucky lady to be loved this much
i wish i had someone to love
me like that ^_^
COMMENTS
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Emochick16
19:30 Mar 20 2009
aw so cute
WolfBite
04:13 Apr 03 2009
very good sinister
MysticMoon
14:49 Apr 16 2009
:)
DarkAngelOfTheMoon18
15:25 Nov 01 2010
aw that's cute
phantomsgrief
00:30 Nov 10 2010
you write beautiful poetry my friend...
emotion is a great conductor of poetry and music one can only hear