well i have just wrote this poem for someone very special.......he means the world to me......
You are like fire rushing through my veins,
youre my poison........
my addiction......
wishing for your embrace,
to feel your arms around me,
to feel your lips against my skin,
a passion burns inside me resembling,
the hunger for lust,
it stretches far over the ocean......
a sea of emotions speak to me,
they whisper to me,
but what they tell me i do not know,
maybe they say im crazy?
or maybe insane?
maybe they are telling me to follow my heart,
to live a dream.......
i see something special beyond the ocean,
What I would give, for him to be mine,
I'd dig my grave,
For all I want is this charmer to be mine,
to make me smile and laugh,
and hold a place in my little morbid heart forever.......
COMMENTS
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CaoimheDierdre
22:19 Jan 05 2009
awww! me likes!
It's beautiful :D
wolfblade
23:03 Jan 05 2009
thats very very sweet
this special someone is gonna love it
trepidation
09:55 Jan 06 2009
Groovy!!! I like it, very good! Love poems are always the best!
DeathsEmbrace
19:38 Jan 06 2009
wow that's beautiful!!!! :D Who did you write it for? :P -whistles- lol
MorbidAngels15
19:43 Jan 06 2009
*whistles back* erm......thats a secret xD
EmeraldPhoenix
21:15 Jan 06 2009
awww. you make me smile. this is lovely. a person would have to be....oh i dont know stuck in the middle of nowhere and practically laying on his back dying not to realize who this is about!!! hahha!!! it is beautiful...you little morbid creature you.
if you ever need a place to stay before decending on his digs...let me know! i'll pick you up at the airport.
hugs
NoctisLucisCaelum
22:59 Jan 28 2009
It's really sweet
Satanathema
11:04 Jan 31 2009
'You are like fire rushing through my veins'
Really good! This poem is able to capture real emotion and how a person can feel, I really enjoyed reading this, good job! :)
KinkyLilVamp
16:46 May 22 2009
aww i love it