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Ok this is new....i suck at writing but here it is.....

15:09 Aug 30 2009
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She's left all alone,

lost in the dark,

no one can help her,

she's falling apart.



Lost is her voice,

she cannot sing,

lost is her sight,

she cannot see.



Lost is the fire,

in her eyes,

lost is her conscience,

that made her do right.



Lost is her soul,

that controlled her life,

lost is her heart,

and her beautiful life.



Lost in everything,

that made her up,

lost in everything,

even her cuts...........

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DarkWolfman
DarkWolfman
15:11 Aug 30 2009

Wow...I can feel your pain in every line.





MorbidAngels15
MorbidAngels15
15:14 Aug 30 2009

yea thats how i felt.....lost to everything :(





vampchica4
vampchica4
17:46 Aug 30 2009

a very emotional piece..

and very strong words. I think that the piece is wonderful, but it is tragic that you felt that way...





wolfblade
wolfblade
19:19 Aug 30 2009

sometimes bein lost is the safest thin





MorbidAngels15
MorbidAngels15
19:21 Aug 30 2009

wish that was the case here hun :(





Marix
Marix
19:41 Aug 30 2009

The pain is beautiful, but always painful.





InconcessusNoctis
InconcessusNoctis
22:41 Aug 30 2009

It's well written..





MorbidAngels15
MorbidAngels15
22:43 Aug 30 2009

Thankyou.....i do try :)





martin
martin
03:12 Aug 31 2009

Bravo, a masterpiece of feeling and emotion, very gutsy.





DeathsEmbrace
DeathsEmbrace
14:35 Aug 31 2009

Ahh that is sad and beautiful, granted i know well what you mean





MorbidAngels15
MorbidAngels15
14:37 Aug 31 2009

yea only a few people know the true meaning behind it :( thanks hun.......








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