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Ok this is new....i suck at writing but here it is.....
15:09 Aug 30 2009
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She's left all alone,
lost in the dark,
no one can help her,
she's falling apart.
Lost is her voice,
she cannot sing,
lost is her sight,
she cannot see.
Lost is the fire,
in her eyes,
lost is her conscience,
that made her do right.
Lost is her soul,
that controlled her life,
lost is her heart,
and her beautiful life.
Lost in everything,
that made her up,
lost in everything,
even her cuts...........
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COMMENTS
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DarkWolfman
15:11 Aug 30 2009
Wow...I can feel your pain in every line.
MorbidAngels15
15:14 Aug 30 2009
yea thats how i felt.....lost to everything :(
vampchica4
17:46 Aug 30 2009
a very emotional piece..
and very strong words. I think that the piece is wonderful, but it is tragic that you felt that way...
wolfblade
19:19 Aug 30 2009
sometimes bein lost is the safest thin
MorbidAngels15
19:21 Aug 30 2009
wish that was the case here hun :(
Marix
19:41 Aug 30 2009
The pain is beautiful, but always painful.
InconcessusNoctis
22:41 Aug 30 2009
It's well written..
MorbidAngels15
22:43 Aug 30 2009
Thankyou.....i do try :)
martin
03:12 Aug 31 2009
Bravo, a masterpiece of feeling and emotion, very gutsy.
DeathsEmbrace
14:35 Aug 31 2009
Ahh that is sad and beautiful, granted i know well what you mean
MorbidAngels15
14:37 Aug 31 2009
yea only a few people know the true meaning behind it :( thanks hun.......