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Savior

21:03 Dec 28 2007
Times Read: 543


A younge girl of 8 years wearing a pure white blood stained dress franticaly runs threw an old church trying to escape from her chaser. The man after her wears a dark crimson cloak covering his soulless eyes. He slowly walks up to the church doorway and stops knowing that he can not enter. The younge girl now sitting in the corner of the confession booth crying threw her innocent eyes. The priest of the church speaks to her to calm her down when the girl tells the priest there is no hope for her. The man now enragged by the girl sends a pack of wolves in after her. The wolves rushing threw the wooden engraved doors surround the younge girl and the priest. They then begin to circle the two of them. The man begins to laugh as the wolves go to strike. The man then stops laughing and is stunned by surprise. He looks down and sees a sword threw his ribs and falls to his knees. The women then firmly takes the sword from the man's back and wipes the blood off. She walks forward to the wolves and the two humans. She pushes the wolves out of the way and grabs the younge girl by the waiste. She says her thanks to the priest and leaps ot the window to disappear into the shadows. The priest smiles as he watches the women venture off with the younge girl. The women sighs frustratedly and holds the younge girl close. The younge girl's eyes become a vampyre red and she smiles with evil intentions.

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A Night to Mourn

08:27 Dec 28 2007
Times Read: 553


A women of 17 years wearing a black laced shroud and corset topped dress that flows to the ground holding a single red rose firmly between her two hands tredges threw the snow on a brisk ariy night. She breaths slow and heavily as though she is slowly feeling death surrounding her now mourning soul. As she walks she begins to sing a small tune that she can remember her mother singing to her. The women then closes her eyes as she exhails and smiles as she imagines her and her mother near a river gathering flowers. She as a younge girl of 6 years playing in the water and her mother singing the same tune that she now sings. Her mother then calling her to her and handing her a small locket. The women then opens her eyes a brushes her fingers on her right hand across the locket that now hangs from her neck and takes a deep breath as she comes close to her destination. She then firmly grasps the locket in her right hand and walks threw the open gates of a gravyard. The women then begins to quicken he rbreathing as she comes closer and closer to the tombstone with her mother's name upon it. She then stops suddenly and stares in a trans-like state at the tombstone. She now falls to her knees as a single salty tear falls down her left cheek becoming chilled in the night air. Without notice a man of pure hatred walks towards her in a firerey rage. She now sobing over her mother's tombstone hears his footsteps and suddenly turns in fright. The man then hurridly takes out a small dagger and peirces her threw the abdomine making her blood soak into her dress and onto the ground. The man then smiles evilishly and forcibly takes the locket from around her neck with a quick pull. He then walks away with a fast pace leaving the women to bleed. As she takes her last breath of air she places the rose on the edge of her mother's tombstone and dies there in the snowy graveyard.

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MistressAkylie
MistressAkylie
04:38 Jan 23 2008

hey look im leaving a comment on my own thingy!!kool








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