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The Change

17:10 Mar 30 2010
Times Read: 537


His gaze from acrossed the room

the sudden haze

of him upon me



the tearing of my clothes

the thrust against the brick wall

hard against my back



The desire to consume me

the need for more

the melting of my flesh as we became one.



Did it last for hours, or days?

The sound of the fire crackling in the room then.

The passion consumed us.



Now on a bed of feathers

His eyes gazed upon mine

Acknowledging that this was the only way.



There was no time, just us.

Then I felt his teeth sink, the venom spreading

and there was blackness.



He stayed with me, holding me until it was over.

All the while I could see the pain in his eyes

for the agony he had caused, for me.



When it was over, I felt a new.

Invincible in nature, but it did not matter.

For I had him and he, I, For eternity.


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Jens
Jens
21:32 May 02 2010

Very well written, except 'anew' is one word. ;) You have a talent for words, I like that.





Therra
Therra
17:04 Jun 14 2010

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing!!





 

The Lion and the Lamb

17:00 Mar 30 2010
Times Read: 538


And what a gorgeous moon last night was.

As is shown down on me

warming my cool skin.



Then I saw him

from acrossed the field

His glowing Amber eyes

lovingly gazing into mine.



He was upon me then

in a flash, before I could blink.

His passionate embrace

yet fragile enough to cause me no harm.

My heart increasing in its rhythmic pace.



We lay down and stared into each others eyes

all the while the night sky dancing for us.

But we did not notice

It was as if he captured my every thought

my every breath, I was still.



This burning rage, the passion inside me

crawling throughout my body as I lay there.

Then, in one delicate kiss, he consumed me completely.



But there would be no more that night

For he had to be careful.

For I am a lamb, who fell in love with a lion.











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Jens
Jens
21:35 May 02 2010

I rather enjoyed it, immensely.








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