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Crying color

14:20 Apr 01 2010
Times Read: 627


I caught you red handed from the blood of my heart.

And now this relationship is falling apart.

You think you can explain? Well don't even start.

Loving you is easy. But hating you is hard.



You're crying color. That's all I can see.

You're crying color. This ain't about me.

Youre crying color. Tears run down your face.

You're crying color and I need my space.



A fountain of lies is streaming down your eyes.

I'm done with the "I love you's". All there's left are "goodbyes".

I found out those secrets you've tried to hide.

And baby, loving you.....is suicide.



You're crying color. A colorful sea.

You're crying color. It's not meant to be.

Youre crying color. Its not helping your case.

You're crying color and I need my space.



You're crying color and dying your brown eyes blue.

But the problem is, I don't think you have a clue.

How bad it is between me and you.

It's not enough for me to say that we're through.

But you did something you can't undo.

And now you're crying you're sorry. Sorry won't do.



You're crying color, a shade of red.

The scarlet letter upon your chest.

The color that once stood for love

Is now the color that I detest.


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MasterSanguinis
MasterSanguinis
14:21 Apr 01 2010

For anyone who reads my poems please do not copy them or use them anywhere else without permission thanks.





Haiku
Haiku
14:22 Apr 01 2010

Brilliant. I can relate to this, very much.





RainWitch
RainWitch
14:57 Apr 01 2010

NICE!





Aracon
Aracon
21:35 Apr 01 2010

Very expressive, thanks for sharing.





TheVampyreNico
TheVampyreNico
03:44 Apr 04 2010

Bravo! very lovely indeed





Rainbow
Rainbow
20:38 Apr 06 2010

You really have a gift for poetry. :)





 

Midnight Passion

11:39 Apr 01 2010
Times Read: 639


Somewhere beyond waking, Just out of touch, I see you smiling, Just as always. You always reminded me, Of warm summer nights, Standing on the shore, Waiting for the stars to fall. Silver moonlight in your hair, Eyes that shimmer like jewels, How often I've wondered, How your blood might taste. I will hold you now, Even as I push you away, For you are an angel, And I have Fallen. I cannot reveal my secrets, Though you beg for explanation, My Darling, you could not love me, If you knew the dark curse I hide. Daylight approaches and you cry, For now it is that I take my leave, Not before a kiss sweet as crimson rain, Heaven forbid it. I have Fallen.


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toxicbite
toxicbite
11:49 Apr 01 2010

Very nice poem. Are you speaking from an experience that you have had or is it something that came to you???






Kajira
Kajira
13:30 Apr 01 2010

Beautifully written.





Haiku
Haiku
14:20 Apr 01 2010

Leaves one feeling breathless.





MasterSanguinis
MasterSanguinis
14:21 Apr 01 2010

For anyone who reads my poems please do not copy them or use them anywhere else without permission thanks.





Aracon
Aracon
21:36 Apr 01 2010

Eloquently expressed. You have a gift for words.





MasterSanguinis
MasterSanguinis
23:18 Apr 01 2010

It was a something that happened to me and i wrote it out.





TheVampyreNico
TheVampyreNico
03:48 Apr 04 2010

Forbidden love would be the right title but, its your masterpiece still very beautiful indeed. It touchs this ol` stone cold heart of mine.





Risque
Risque
06:19 Apr 05 2010

very good job

have a way in expressing yourself so others can feel what you felt writing it





Silverhawk
Silverhawk
11:39 Apr 06 2010

I'm reminded of a Tale of Two Cities..."It is better to have loved and lost than to not have loved at all." In reading this, it seems you do not give yourself enough credit in having the ability to keep the delightful and good things in your life that you cherish most. It is the judgement of those we love that we deeply fear simply because the rejection sends us spiraling farther away from the light of acceptance and selfless love. I believe that neither is accesible without tha same fear and pain...selflessness in and of itself is a rare creature. There's most always a bargaining chip on the table.



Just my meandering thoughts..:) I liked this one, but I would have entitled it The Fallen. You have a sweet and romantic heart under all of that dominant exterior, I look forward to reading more.



Later Gator "





Rainbow
Rainbow
20:37 Apr 06 2010

Very romantic, makes me melt. hehe








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