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When Darkness Comes by Me
23:13 Apr 16 2011
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You're flowing through my veins, permitted in my mind, leaving a bitter after taste in my mouth. how can a feeling of such emptiness have so much presence?

A constant putrid smell, a chill on my skin, an over whelming sense that something is trapped beneath an indestructible surface. everything raw and layed out before me. but covered in an insurpassable haze.

A perplexing and radiant light is shone. but all I see is never ending darkness, a labyrinth with no beginning or end.

Only fragments of the maze left at hand. as no clue as to how. Ive made it from one seemingly pointless section to the next. so all that I possess is a lingering doubt that I will never be set free from this vast and empty abyss.

The End...

COMMENTS

ButterflyKisses
23:35 Apr 16 2011

I liked reading this.

MorbidxChaos
00:12 Apr 17 2011

Interesting

Legolas665
00:14 Apr 17 2011

Thank you and it is Protected. by Poem Hunter.com

FeverDreams
05:41 Apr 17 2011

Nice work ... i have always wonder ... how emptiness and have so much value ...

Nicely said ... looking forward to more of your work.

HisRainingLove
07:09 Apr 19 2011

love it

Legolas665
07:44 Apr 19 2011

do you mean it?

vampyrebeauty
12:31 Apr 19 2011

Very nice!

Zilaheteb
00:46 Apr 25 2011

A beautiful contradiction to life.

Starr2010
02:29 May 10 2011

This is so sad, it's like your sayin that your lost and you have no way to leave or that your beng held hostage with no escape.

Legolas665
03:44 May 11 2011

Exactly Starr, you nailed it right on the head. I am being held hostage by a unseen force and the only way. I would ever feel free from that vast and empty abyss. is to find someone special. like in my short story. MY DARK Love!