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My Dark Love's Prologue

04:23 Jun 10 2011
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Once upon a time, there was a beautiful mortal lady named Delia. who had long black hair, white skin, blue eyes and who loved nature and animals etc.



But she also had a dark side to her. to where she liked Vampires and the taste for Blood.



So one night, she was walking home from her work and she came across a stranger who was sitting on an old wooden bench and she didn't know at the time. that the guy on the bench was a Vampire. so when she passed him. they both had eye contact and she kept on walking and then. she heard her name being called from behind her and she looked back. but the guy who was just sitting on the bench seconds ago was gone and she turned her head back around and that’s when the guy appeared in front of her and he sinked his teeth in her neck and he started to drink some of her Blood and then he told her to drink quickly from his chest to have an immortal life and then she dranked from his chest after when he made a cut and she to turned into a Vampire and she went with the stranger to learn a little more about Vampires and how they lived etc and to have a place to stay and then he told her.



If you go any where without my permission. then you can no longer stay here. for I am Your Master and you are not ready to go by yourself. but go anyway he replied.



But don't forget who Your Master is.



So she went back to her parents house and went through the open window. the way she left it to get a few things. like clothes etc and by the time she got up there and packed up some of her favorite clothes and put them in an old suit case. she bought a long time ago and then her dad and mother heard a noise coming from her room and they opened the door and saw her as a Vampire and they both got freaked out and started to bring out holy water and crosses and then she had to get out of there.



But before she did, the parents told her their daughter Delia is dead to them. so she went ahead and left her parents house back through the open window and once outside of the house. she heard the window being shut by her parents. then she notices, the night is slowing creeping to day and she remembered. there was an old Underground Root Cellar just five miles outside of Town and on the way there. she came across a wooden casket laying in the alleyway of two buildings and she checked it and it was empty. so she put her suit case inside the casket and picked it up and started to run very fast with it and it only took not even a minute to reach the Underground Root Cellar and this is where she lived mostly of her immortal life.



Some years pass and there was a Big War between Humans and Vampires. but Delia didn't want to get into the battle. if she didn't have to. so instead, she just stayed at the Underground Root Cellar and fed off from the animals in the forest.



Then a year after the Big War, when there was heavily losses on both sides. the King had a meeting with the Master Vampire and they both signed a Peace Treaty in Blood.



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Aracon
Aracon
02:28 Jun 21 2011

WoW, very well written. Thanks for sharing.






 

My Dark Love

02:43 Jun 10 2011
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Then once upon a time, a few twenty years later. there was a mortal man named Kain. who lived in a well Guarded Castle with his 30 Minion Guards and He was a furious leader and well respected from the Greeks and near by Towns.



Then there was Delia, who was a Female Vampire. who lived in a Underground Root Cellar out in the forest. just five miles outside of Town. but she only came out at night to drink Blood from the animals. most of her immortal life. cause, there was a Peace Treaty between Humans and Vampires. until one night, there

was no more animals to be found in the forest. so she had no choice, but to feed off from the humans from the near by Towns without getting caught. the Towns People caught on and got mad at Delia and threaten to destroy her. cause they knew she was the only Vampire in the area. until Kain heard about this from his messager boy named Damien. who went to Town every day to get food etc and whatever else Kain and his 30 Minion Guards needed from Town and while Damien was in Town. he over heard some of the Towns People talking of what they wanted to do with Delia.





So once, Damien left Town in a Two Horse Carriage. he made sure, he told the Coachmen to wait in Town until he had everything off his list. before he arrived back at the Castle.

then once, he and the Coachmen arrived, he went ahead and told Kain of what he over heard. from the Towns People.





So Kain immediately, sent out a few of his Guards to go and rescue Delia from the Towns People and to bring her back safely to Kain in a Four Horse Carriage. So once it arrived at the location of the forest. Where Delia lived.



The Guards had to get out and had to walk to the Root Cellar. Cause of the trees, the brushes and ditches was impassable to get through with the Four Horse Carriage.



And once the Guards arrived at the Root Cellar. From a couple of miles or so from the dirt road. the Guards spotted some of the Towns People. Trying to enter the Root Cellar. Until the Commanding Guard said. Hey what are you doing there! And the Towns Peoples Leader spoked up and said. What does it look like we’re doing. We’re getting rid of the threat that Delia brought onto herself. by killing some of our family members, friends, kids and whatever else. she did to deserve to be destroyed. So the Guards. started to run up to the Root Cellar as fast as they could. to push the Towns People back away with their swords, spears, crossbows and shields drawn to fight. if they had to. then the Leader of the Towns People spoked up and said. we're not going to forget about this and you tell Kain the same message and then he said. this forest is now considered the 'Dark Forest’.so the Towns People finally started

to retreat back to Town with their torches, clubs,

pitch forks, axes, etc and the Towns People

knew they was unmatched against the Guards

and the Commanding Guard said. leave your weapons and torches here. so the Towns People left their weapons and torches behind and retreated back to Town and then one of the Guards started to make his way down into the Root Cellar and he had to watch his step. cause some of the steps was broken off and they was fragile and covered with leaves, tree roots and vines.





So he finally made his way down the steps carefully and once he made it at the bottom of the steps of the Root Cellar. he tried to open up the old door that was covered up in vines. but before he opened it. he noticed it was fragile. so he just stopped and turned around and went back up the old steps where the other Guards

was at and they waited there by the Root Cellar for Delia to come out at night and finally the sun went down and it turned dark and there was a little fog started to row in and the Guards lit the torches. so they could see in the darkness of the night and that’s when.



Delia the Female Vampire finally came out from her tomb of the Underground Root Cellar and she didn't have any problems with the vines, tree roots etc. cause she knew, if she respected them. then they would respect her and finally. she came up the steps of the Root Cellar and the Commanding Guard saw her coming up the steps and spoked to Delia and said.



We are here in Peace and we are here to take you to a more secured environment and Delia asked why and the Commanding Guard told her.

you are in danger by the Towns People. if you stay here.



So Delia just nodded her head to the Guards that she understood. What they meant

and a couple of the Guards wanted to go down into the Root Cellar. But Delia said No.

let me get what I need down there. so the Two Guards replied okay and they stayed up from the Root Cellar. While Delia went down and got her wooden coffin and came back up the steps with it and then she told the Guards. I am ready to go and then the same Two Guards. Who asked to go down into the Root Cellar asked Delia. If they could carry her coffin for her. From here to the Carriage and she replied. Yes You May.







So Delia and the Two Guards who was carrying her coffin and the rest of the Guards was

walking through the forest. with the torches lit. but they left the Towns People Weapons behind as a reminder for anyone and they finally arrived back at the Carriage. that was sitting along the dirt road and One of the Guards opened the door up for Delia to go in and the rest of them helped the Two Guards who was carrying Delia's coffin. to put it up onto the top of the Carriage

and they made sure it was secured. once it was secured. they put out their torches along the dirt road and then. they got into the carriage. and when it was Delia's turn to get into the Carriage. the fog started to lift. while she was getting inside with the door open. then She notices something Black laying on the Back Seat. It turned out to be a Black Rose and she thought to her self. Ooh I love Black Roses!. but she didn’t ask who it was from and the Two Coachmen’s who was watching the Carriage. while the Guards went out and got Delia. from the Root Cellar. they made sure.



She got into the Carriage safely and right before they shut the door for Delia they told her. It might be awhile before they reach Kain’s Castle. So You and the Guards might want to get comfortable. as much as possible.



Cause the only trail that we can take is rocky and rugged. She replied okay with a smile and even the Guards replied okay and we know.



So Delia began to lay onto the Back Seat holding the Black Rose close to her. cause now she knew who it was from and while the Guards had the Front Seats and the Floor of the Carriage and the Two Coachmen’s finally closed the door and started to climb back up onto the Carriage to start their journey.





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My Dark Love Cont

02:41 Jun 10 2011
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Mean while on their journey, they used the moon light to see in the darkness and they came across more forests, rugged holes, rocks, broken trees etc. but the thing that they had to stop for to look at was an old broken down shack with a young man. standing in front of them in the middle of the dirt road. holding his magic stick and one of the Coachmen’s climb down. and asked, what are you doing in the middle of the road? and the young man replied. if you are using the moon light to see in the darkness. you are going to need my help. cause the Moon Light or even Sun Light doesn't even shine. on the other side of that corner over there in the 'Pitch Dark Valley' as he points with his magic stick. so the Coachmen asked him. why should we trust you and the young man replied. you don't have to trust me for I don't trust you. but I know you got to get at Kain's Castle before sun rise. so let me help you to get Delia there and the Coachman didn't even say a word to the comment that the young man just gave about Delia. but he was thinking to himself. how does he know? and the young man replied and said. I know many things and this is one of things I know quite well. so the Coachman said okay. but you have to ride up there with us and the young man replied and said ok and by the way, the names Legolas and finally the Commanding Guard came out and asked. what’s the problem here and the Coachman said. there is no problem. Legolas here was just advising me. there is no moon light over there on the other side of the corner and the Guard said ok. but he would have to ride up there with you guys and the Coachman said. yes this is what I just told him. so Legolas and the Coachman climb back up on the Carriage and the Commanding Guard who just came out. finally went back into the Carriage and told Delia and the rest of the Guards what was taking so long.



So they started up their journey once again and as soon as they got around the corner where Legolas said. they noticed, there was no more moon light shinning in the 'Pitch Dark Valley' and Legolas says to the Two Coachmen’s. see what I mean and Legolas turns to his magic stick and says some magical words to his stick and then all of sudden. there was a light coming in front of the Carriage to light the dirt trail in front of them and then he says to the Two Coachmen’s. what ever you See or Hear. Do Not Stop for this place is Haunted by the Damned. the Two Coachmen’s just looked at Legolas like they was worried and then he says to them. Have No Fear for they Sense It and then they go by some dark and spooky trees with spooky noises/voices, then came ghosts, witches, goblins, ghouls, demons, Etc and this place only comes alive only once a year on Halloween Day/Night and this is another reason. Why its called the ‘Pitch Dark Valley’

and they kept following the dirt road until they reached a point to where the moon light began to shine once again and Legolas says to his stick some magic words and the stick quit shining a light and then he says to the Two Coachmen’s let me off here. So the Two Coachmen’s stopped the Carriage and let Legolas off and while he walking towards the back of the Carriage. to where Delia was sitting. he said to Delia outside of the Carriage. "May Your Future With Kain Be A Pleasant One" and he walked past the Carriage back into the pitch darkness and was never seen or heard from again and the Two Coachmen’s and all the Guards and even Delia. Asked themselves. Who was That?



But they just kept on with their journey until an hour later.





They finally arrived at Kain’s Castle. Delia was amazed what She saw. There was a Huge Water Fountain right in the middle of a Huge Black Rose Garden with a Huge Maze

Completely surrounded the Rose Garden and Water Fountain.

which kept the Roses Watered and then in the back of the Castle. There was an Old Graveyard dating back in the 1600s with fresh cut green grass and beyond the Graveyard. there was a Big cliff over looking a Big Sea.



She was amazed on how the outside looked. but very curious, on what the inside of the Castle looks like. So she followed the Guards into the Castle and the Commanding Guard told her to wait here in the Lobby until Kain meets up with you Delia as he walks off to go to the Ballroom and Sometime goes by and Kain finally comes out from his Den.



The respected Kain had a black pointing hat with a respected outfit on and as soon as Kain and Delia had eye contact and started to walk closer to one another and stopped within a foot of each other and Kain spoked up and said. This is your new home now Delia and Kain told his Guards to find the most darkest wing in the Castle for Delia quickly. before the sun comes up. So all of the Guards and even Damien

went out and found the perfect wing for her and painted all the windows in the East Wing pitch black. it took them half of the night to complete and Delia put her wooden coffin in one of her rooms. she picked out for herself. just in the nick of time. before the sun came up. but just then, she saw another Wooden Coffin laying in the corner. But this one was more Heavy Duty and more Reinforced. So she just used this one instead. Cause her old one was Rotted.



So the next night, Delia asked Kain. if She had his wishes to be out in the Rose Garden and the Graveyard. Kain replied as he motioned his hands outwards like he was saying. Feel Free. So Delia just smiled and went out to the Rose Garden to pick out some Black Roses for the Old Graveyard and placing each Black Rose on each Tombstone. Delia came back into the Castle afterwards and she saw Kain and she said to him. Thank You. Kain replied and said Your Welcome and Delia said No. Thank You for the coffin and taking me in and protecting me from the Towns People. Kain replied but did not say anything. He just bowed instead and a few seconds later. he replied. You might want to Thank Damien to for the coffin. cause he helped me with it and then he replied. anytime you need Blood. There is a lot of animals here on this property. but please don't take any from my Guards. for they protect us and Delia replied and said ok. So Delia went and found Damien in the Game Room and she replied. Thank You Damien and he replied. Your Welcome Delia with a smile.



So a few years go by and Kain wanted to surprise Delia. so he asked her. if he could pick out the biggest room. She had in her wing to make something special for her that she would enjoy very much and She replied yes. then he said okay and he found the biggest room that Delia had in her wing and started to work in the room. He picked out for her and little bit more time went by and she asked him. what are you working on? And which room is it?. he replied and said to her that one as he points. but please don’t go in there. cause its unfinished and it’s a surprise..



She replied and said ok and almost a whole month pasts and she did not seen any hare of Kain until every night for dinner and as they are sitting at the dinner table in the Lounge Room with the candles burning ever slowly with old paintings of his family members and friends and in every corner of the room stood a different statue of an eagle, a wolf, a dragon and an old gargoyle.





Then she asks him again. Where have you been spending your time?. Kain replied and said. In the special room. They both started to eat again and drink again. So they got done eating and drinking and they spent time with one another. Before they went to bed. right before sun rise like they usually do. Until one night, Kain finally completed the room. so he went out to the Rose Garden without saying a word to Delia and picked out a dozen of Black Roses and walked up to Delia and said. here is a dozen of Black Roses I just picked for you and please grab my hand. cause its that time to show you. your special room. they both walked up the long stairs pass the old paintings of more family members, friends, other castles, graveyards etc, even the candles, the statues of different kinds like in the Lounge Room and in every hallway and in every room throughout the whole Castle. They finally reached the outside of the door and Kain said to Delia. close your eyes and follow my lead. Delia closes her eyes and gives Kain her hand again in trust as Kain opens the door with an old skeleton key and they both walk in. then he says to her. wait here as He closes the door behind her and he says to her. open your eyes Delia and she opens her eyes and she drops down on her knees with a big surprise look on her face. As she sees a big swimming pool filled with Blood with Black Roses floating on top and right above the Blood. there is an old Gargoyle high above. in the middle of the room. Then he says to her. this is your special room and anytime you want to come in here. you don't have to ask me. cause I made it. just for you.





Delia didn’t say a word. cause she was speechless and to much impressed and amazed on how the room looked. then he was like. You have not seen nothing until you see this. He went over and blowed out all the candles accept for the ones that was around the swimming pool and then all of sudden. the wall right behind the swimming pool turned and moved. Revealing another room that had more statues with old swords and shields and all of sudden. the old Gargoyle right above the swimming pool. Started to pour out Blood and landing inside of the pool below.



So Delia went into the pool of Blood and she felt something what Legolas said to her a long time ago and then. she asked Kain who was sitting by her on the floor by the pool and by the way, on the journey here on the first night. there was a young man named Legolas and he said to me. May Your Future With Kain Be A Pleasant One and Kain replied to Delia and said. Yes I know Legolas. for he is My Brother. for he does know many of things.



And Delia thought to herself. how can this be? but Delia didn’t ask Kain this question. Cause Delia is very happy she met Kain and a few years later. Delia and Kain got married and lived happy ever after. until one night. Kain and Delia had their tenth wedding adversary at the Castle and there was meats, fruits, pies, music, dancing etc and Damien got really sick that night and died and then the 29 Minion Guards died a few days later and even the Commanding Guard died. but he remembered at the end of his life that he forgot all about the message that he was post to gave Kain a long time ago. of what the Towns People said. But it was too late. Cause even Kain got really sick and almost died from eating the fruit that the Towns People gave them. that was laced with some slow active poison. but Kain was the strong one. cause all he thought about was

His Dark Love Named Delia.



So Delia had to transform Kain quickly into a Vampire. before he dies. cause then she wouldn’t have any other kind of protection without Kain against the Towns People.



And this is Another Story.



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Starr2010
Starr2010
02:18 Jul 18 2011

I'm going to give you a coment for all three of your stories, it's easier then doing every single one okay.



Here it goes: I really love your stories, I have read John Saul, S.K. (Stephen King) and Ann Rice etc...Among all of them I think your stories top them all, you have a good imagination and creative ability.

Don't ever sell yourself short, because your orginal and I like that.








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