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Rise of Power

07:07 Nov 20 2008
Times Read: 659


Darkness reigns as the light fails

Demons control humanity as the angels flee

People cry and children die

Those who can don't and those who can't try

Nothing works, everything fails

In the darkness it grows

Becomes what it is meant to be

The darkness spreads

As it becomes stronger

Feeding off the darkness it strengthens

As the darkness spreads

My power grows, bonding with the darkness

As the light grows weaker

I rise and with a mighty shout I unleash my power


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Draiven
Draiven
07:08 Nov 20 2008

I was angry when i wrote this so it might not be very good.





NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
07:32 Nov 20 2008

You shouldnt explain your poetry to people, its YOUR poetry. If someone doesnt like it, then oh well its THEIR problem. You write very well, and its all good because it comes from within, and that is the best you can be, is yourself.





 

Wolf Spirit

05:45 Nov 19 2008
Times Read: 676


Running through the forest

Wind blowing through my ears

Trees only a blur on each side of me

My body rushes with energy and strength

I hear howling behind me

As the others race to catch up

Faster, faster, faster I think in my mind

I run faster, dodging trees and branches

The howls start to sound farther away

I smile as spirit pulses with freedom

I lift my head and let out a piercing howl

In that moment I let go and unleash the Wolf Spirit


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NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
06:04 Nov 19 2008

Ooo...very nice, I love it.





dominoe
dominoe
06:15 Nov 19 2008

That's great ^^ I love how descriptive it is.





Tima
Tima
06:20 Nov 19 2008

I adore this 1. As I love wolves. I feed them here daily.





krissykbee
krissykbee
06:53 Nov 19 2008

Wow love it very good!!!





 

Connection

02:21 Nov 18 2008
Times Read: 691


Walking slowly, leaves falling all around me

I breath in deep smelling the earth, and vegetation

I close my eyes feeling the connection

With the earth, the trees, and every living thing

I lift my arms and lean my head back

I take in the earthen fragrance again

My spirit pulsates with energy and joy

The connection grows stronger, more powerful

I open my mouth and sing the Song of Spirit

A deep and mysterious song of peace and fulfillment

I open my eyes and see the spirits of the forest

All around me, joining in my song

Beautiful and enchanting

The connection becoming complete


COMMENTS

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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
02:29 Nov 18 2008

Wow. I can totally feel like i'm there.





NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
02:34 Nov 18 2008

It is very pretty. I like it.





CrimsonSmiles
CrimsonSmiles
06:42 Aug 19 2009

Mmm... amazing.. fantastical.. I'm quite speechless, it's rapturous.



One of my favs indeed~





 

As The Light Fades

02:37 Nov 14 2008
Times Read: 723


As the light fades the memory comes back

Stabbing, gashing, and sundering my heart,

My body, my soul

It can never be fixed

Never can be made better

As the light fades

The world grows dark

I remember my childhood

The one that was always there

The only one whom I ever truly loved

With all my heart

As the light fades

I remember those wonderful times

Spent with the love i lost so soon, too early, too fast

The pain fills my soul

My eyes sting with tears but they never fall

So i drag the blade across my skin

And watch as the red tears fall to the floor Soundless

As the light fades

And the world starts to sink away into the dark

I go back to the time when it all made sense

When it was easy and full of light

But with that, the memory of that day

In the hospital room

With the heart monitor

Making that long monotonous sound

Not picking up a beat from the one in the bed

As the light fades

I remember her face, rested and peaceful

All the pain gone from her

I lean in and for the last time

I kiss my mothers cheek

Tears fall from my eyes

I say "Goodbye" and "I love you"

As the light fades

I begin to lose consciousness

I close my eyes

And a single tear rolls down my cheek

Then fades away

As the light fades there is nothing left


COMMENTS

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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
02:40 Nov 14 2008

*cries silent tears*

Babe. . . .

*struggles for right words*

There are no words for this. This poem is so heartfelt and beautiful, nothing can ever compare.





NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
05:31 Nov 14 2008

This one is my favorite. Keep writing, a good poet will tell his or her stories through striking words in a beautiful manner that you supplied here. It is also so sad, and I am so sorry.





dominoe
dominoe
12:28 Nov 14 2008

This is my favorite of them all too. I teared up at the end, at the words of a stranger. I'm sorry for your loss.





 

What Once Was

01:59 Nov 14 2008
Times Read: 735


What once was will never be

It was there and now its gone

Was something good, something great

But as the months and years go by

That which was once good and great

Falls farther from the light

sinking deeper beneath the surface

Drowning, but continuing to live

To live always in pain

Always falling, never hitting bottom

But never going back to the top

It keeps struggling to break the surface

Always falling, struggling to breath

What once was can never be what it used to be

It can never be good or even great

What once was

Is something different than what once was

What once was, was once at one time...........me


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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
02:05 Nov 14 2008

*sniffles*



Photobucket





NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
05:28 Nov 14 2008

This one is very redundant, but then at the end, I love how you bring it all together, so it actually works. Great job.





 

The End

01:43 Nov 14 2008
Times Read: 743


I fall to the ground broken and bleeding

Life finally getting in the final blow

I fall hard, vision going blurry

I lay there breath rasping from my lungs

Wishing I could go back, it starts to get dark

The pain starts to fade as my end draws near

I can hear it whispering promises of relief

My eyes grow heavy and I cant see anymore

For a second I'm scared, then that to fades away

Breathing becomes harder

And as my last breaths come out

"Finally" one breath, "the End" last breath

After all the pain and the sorrow

The story draws to a close

And God writes on the last page of my book



The End


COMMENTS

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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
01:46 Nov 14 2008

*sniffles* So beautiful. . .





RaineVampire
RaineVampire
01:53 Nov 14 2008

I really liked it





Starrbright
Starrbright
03:39 Nov 14 2008

This poem is moving with sorrow and feeling of emptiness for me .





NightlyXForest
NightlyXForest
05:26 Nov 14 2008

You captured the mood very well, I think you are great.





xXxDaylightDiesxXx
xXxDaylightDiesxXx
21:19 Nov 14 2008

Awh.

This is good.

































[Even though I don't believe in god]

I love your poems.








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