Darkness reigns as the light fails
Demons control humanity as the angels flee
People cry and children die
Those who can don't and those who can't try
Nothing works, everything fails
In the darkness it grows
Becomes what it is meant to be
The darkness spreads
As it becomes stronger
Feeding off the darkness it strengthens
As the darkness spreads
My power grows, bonding with the darkness
As the light grows weaker
I rise and with a mighty shout I unleash my power
Running through the forest
Wind blowing through my ears
Trees only a blur on each side of me
My body rushes with energy and strength
I hear howling behind me
As the others race to catch up
Faster, faster, faster I think in my mind
I run faster, dodging trees and branches
The howls start to sound farther away
I smile as spirit pulses with freedom
I lift my head and let out a piercing howl
In that moment I let go and unleash the Wolf Spirit
COMMENTS
Ooo...very nice, I love it.
That's great ^^ I love how descriptive it is.
I adore this 1. As I love wolves. I feed them here daily.
Wow love it very good!!!
Walking slowly, leaves falling all around me
I breath in deep smelling the earth, and vegetation
I close my eyes feeling the connection
With the earth, the trees, and every living thing
I lift my arms and lean my head back
I take in the earthen fragrance again
My spirit pulsates with energy and joy
The connection grows stronger, more powerful
I open my mouth and sing the Song of Spirit
A deep and mysterious song of peace and fulfillment
I open my eyes and see the spirits of the forest
All around me, joining in my song
Beautiful and enchanting
The connection becoming complete
COMMENTS
Wow. I can totally feel like i'm there.
It is very pretty. I like it.
Mmm... amazing.. fantastical.. I'm quite speechless, it's rapturous.
One of my favs indeed~
As the light fades the memory comes back
Stabbing, gashing, and sundering my heart,
My body, my soul
It can never be fixed
Never can be made better
As the light fades
The world grows dark
I remember my childhood
The one that was always there
The only one whom I ever truly loved
With all my heart
As the light fades
I remember those wonderful times
Spent with the love i lost so soon, too early, too fast
The pain fills my soul
My eyes sting with tears but they never fall
So i drag the blade across my skin
And watch as the red tears fall to the floor Soundless
As the light fades
And the world starts to sink away into the dark
I go back to the time when it all made sense
When it was easy and full of light
But with that, the memory of that day
In the hospital room
With the heart monitor
Making that long monotonous sound
Not picking up a beat from the one in the bed
As the light fades
I remember her face, rested and peaceful
All the pain gone from her
I lean in and for the last time
I kiss my mothers cheek
Tears fall from my eyes
I say "Goodbye" and "I love you"
As the light fades
I begin to lose consciousness
I close my eyes
And a single tear rolls down my cheek
Then fades away
As the light fades there is nothing left
COMMENTS
*cries silent tears*
Babe. . . .
*struggles for right words*
There are no words for this. This poem is so heartfelt and beautiful, nothing can ever compare.
This one is my favorite. Keep writing, a good poet will tell his or her stories through striking words in a beautiful manner that you supplied here. It is also so sad, and I am so sorry.
This is my favorite of them all too. I teared up at the end, at the words of a stranger. I'm sorry for your loss.
What once was will never be
It was there and now its gone
Was something good, something great
But as the months and years go by
That which was once good and great
Falls farther from the light
sinking deeper beneath the surface
Drowning, but continuing to live
To live always in pain
Always falling, never hitting bottom
But never going back to the top
It keeps struggling to break the surface
Always falling, struggling to breath
What once was can never be what it used to be
It can never be good or even great
What once was
Is something different than what once was
What once was, was once at one time...........me
COMMENTS
This one is very redundant, but then at the end, I love how you bring it all together, so it actually works. Great job.
I fall to the ground broken and bleeding
Life finally getting in the final blow
I fall hard, vision going blurry
I lay there breath rasping from my lungs
Wishing I could go back, it starts to get dark
The pain starts to fade as my end draws near
I can hear it whispering promises of relief
My eyes grow heavy and I cant see anymore
For a second I'm scared, then that to fades away
Breathing becomes harder
And as my last breaths come out
"Finally" one breath, "the End" last breath
After all the pain and the sorrow
The story draws to a close
And God writes on the last page of my book
The End
COMMENTS
*sniffles* So beautiful. . .
I really liked it
This poem is moving with sorrow and feeling of emptiness for me .
You captured the mood very well, I think you are great.
Awh.
This is good.
[Even though I don't believe in god]
I love your poems.
COMMENTS
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Draiven
07:08 Nov 20 2008
I was angry when i wrote this so it might not be very good.
NightlyXForest
07:32 Nov 20 2008
You shouldnt explain your poetry to people, its YOUR poetry. If someone doesnt like it, then oh well its THEIR problem. You write very well, and its all good because it comes from within, and that is the best you can be, is yourself.