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7 entries this month
 

Emotionless

04:56 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 603


The wall has been built and it stands strong

Nothing gets through, no one gets in

People can't break it and armies can't destroy it

Pain crumbles against it, no one can find a weakness

Life has helped to build this barrier

Forcing what was needed to fabricate it to reinforce it

The world doesn't understand it

Feelings don't get through

Life has forced me to build this barricade

That surrounds my heart

Nothing gets in, nothing gets out, its empty

There is nothing inside, everything tries to get in

The wall still stands, never wearing always strong

There is nothing inside, no one can see

I am emotionless


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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
05:26 Feb 04 2009

*whispers in your ear* I know a way in.





Velulana
Velulana
05:35 Feb 09 2009

*tear*love the poem its sad but true for alot of people..i knw the felling...





CrimsonSmiles
CrimsonSmiles
06:40 Aug 19 2009

Very intriguing~

Although.. out of curiousity and to point out in my opinion.. I hope not to offend but as a poets/philosophical view..



yes.. 'Pain crumbles against it,..'

but wouldn't pain also feed and be absorbed into the wall?? Enabling the wall to get taller and more complicated to ever break.



I enjoyed this one very much (:





 

Worlds End

04:44 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 604


The sun disappears and everything goes quiet

People look up at the sky not knowing

The end is near it is getting closer

Someone notices the moon has gotten bigger

Everyone looks up and stares

It keeps growing

It begins to enter the Earths atmosphere

Pieces start to break off, raining down

Someone screams and everyone starts to panic

Running here and there trying to hide

I walk down the street, buildings explode around me

Everyone is screaming now, chaos erupting

I find a bench and sit down folding my arms

Knowing that nothing will help, nothing will stop it

Its right above us, the force is massive

Finally it reaches the ground, the sound is horrible

It was the end of everything and everyone

It was the worlds end


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xXxDaylightDiesxXx
xXxDaylightDiesxXx
20:12 Dec 30 2008

I like this one =]





yamato0koya
yamato0koya
05:24 Feb 04 2009

You brought the moon down, didn't you babe?





 

Hollow

04:29 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 605


This emptiness is all consuming

Feeding off of anything and everything

The emptiness grows taking over

My soul turns darker, the edges fading

The darkness that comes from the emptiness

This is my power and my strength now

I have been forsaken by the light

I embrace the emptiness, no longer fighting it

As the darkness grows so does the darkness

This is not a bad thing for it takes away the pain

The darkness is spreading as the emptiness grows

Devouring my soul

I become empty

I become hollow


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Void

04:15 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 606


Quiet and empty nothing existing

Everything is pulled in, becoming part of it

All the worlds of noise and war becoming silent

Peace reigns for there is nothing here

There are no wars, famines, or hate just nothing

Everyone fears this place for it is dark

No one can feel, they have to see

This place is dark, quiet, and peaceful

No pain. no sorrow, just nothing

I seek this place of peace and quiet

Everyday i search, always looking

Forever i seek it, i seek the void


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masochisticservitor
masochisticservitor
08:55 Dec 31 2008

this is my favorite! i love the flow.





 

Chaos and Sorrow

04:02 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 607


Ground shaking, splitting open, fire erupting out

Homes and lives lost, consumed by the fire

An An unrecognizable celestial entity draws closer

Its approach causes the stars to fall

The oceans surge and broil, all life being destroyed

people are running, screaming and pulling their hair

The horror driving them mad, causing utter chaos

The ones who could have stopped it were driven out

The ones who could have brought order were killed

And as the world falls deeper into chaos, order lost

The people remember their mistake

And beg for redemption

The world breaks apart and the cries stop

All that's left is chaos and sorrow


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Horizon

03:30 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 609


Standing here on the hill, rocks and grass all around

A slight breeze blowing across my face

I stare out at the fading light on the horizon

The day lying down to rest as night awakens

Clouds colliding with stars, as day turns into night

The beauty strikes the soul and it reveals a truth

An illustration of life and death, beginning and ending

The light of life falling into the darkness of death

Day is almost gone and the air grows cold

And on the wind i hear a whisper

"Life and death are always beside one another

Rea to take over as the other ends"

As i listen toe the wind

The light of day, of life falls behind the horizon


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Why?

03:30 Dec 17 2008
Times Read: 610


Sitting here looking out at the world

Seeing all the hate and all the sadness

everyone in pain, killing each other

I look out at all this and i ask,"Why?"

"Why is this happening?","Why don't they see?"

A child falls, no more energy left to live

People walk around him, pretending not to see him

The image changes and i see two brothers

One killing the other, thinking its for peace

It changes again and i see a people

Hunted and murdered for what they believe

The image changes for the last time

And i see what could have, should have been

Peaceful and loving no one killing or dying for nothing

And seeing all this and knowing what could be

With a heavy heart and exhausted mind i ask

Why?


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yamato0koya
yamato0koya
05:22 Feb 04 2009

Good question.








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