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I've tried and I've failed

to be a part of this

I've tried and I've failed

to be what you want me to be



I'll never get out,

I'll never find peace

I'll never find what makes you,

what makes me



cause I've tried and I've failed

I've tried to be you

I've tried and I've failed

I've tried to be me

but nothing seems to be in my reach



I'll never find

what could be me

I'll never see

what's left of me



cause I fight but I drown

and I'm drowning again

I've tried to be you

I've tried and I've failed

I've tried to be me

but nothing seems to go my way



I've tried and I've tried

and I've failed to be free

I've tried and I've tried

but nothing seems to be me







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I haven't written anything in years... I've always tried too hard. This came out of nowhere, I wrote it in 5 minutes... It's a good feeling... just writing without feeling any pressure, just write down whatever comes up in your mind... what I'm trying to say is... this is nothing special, I'm just trying to release myself somehow.

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DireConsequences
20:07 Nov 23 2009

I can seriously relate to this poem.



I'll explain in my message to you in a little bit.



:-)



And yes, it does feel wonderful writing with no pressure.

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Become
20:10 Dec 22 2009

you're a very good writer - you should definitely keep it up, by all means

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